Debut track, Pixel - Louder (animated lyric video)

[Pixel]

Hey guys, I just released my first ever track and would love some feedback, I produced, wrote and performed it myself, so please check it out!
Oh it also has this cool little lyric video where the words come in sync with the vocals, and of course if you like it I of course would appreciate a like and subscribe, I've got heaps more coming

oh and here is my LOF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=171599&start=15

song link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NiMJwrgfJGQ

[gutawafang]

Damn. Beat is simple but the bass makes it such a banger beat hahahahaaha.

The lyrics were good. I love the multis and the flow. The video is a big plus because I know you put in effort to coordinate with your song. Good job on the effort.

I think the singing can be improved and it would be even better. Some parts are monotonous too which made it very plain even though I still enjoyed it. Good. 8/10

[Pixel]

Damn. Beat is simple but the bass makes it such a banger beat hahahahaaha.

The lyrics were good. I love the multis and the flow. The video is a big plus because I know you put in effort to coordinate with your song. Good job on the effort.

I think the singing can be improved and it would be even better. Some parts are monotonous too which made it very plain even though I still enjoyed it. Good. 8/10

Thanks man, the honest feedback and respect means a lot!

[Eedee]

I agree with what Guta said, you sounded monotone a lot. The beat was simple but it worked, and it's definitely one of those beats where your delivery HAS to stand out, and unfortunately it didn't. But it's so close, dude.

Loved your lyrics, flow, and train of thought you had going on. Solid song, a little rough around the edges, but (cliche lol) practice will definitely help.

Keep 'em coming!

[Pixel]

I agree with what Guta said, you sounded monotone a lot. The beat was simple but it worked, and it's definitely one of those beats where your delivery HAS to stand out, and unfortunately it didn't. But it's so close, dude.

Loved your lyrics, flow, and train of thought you had going on. Solid song, a little rough around the edges, but (cliche lol) practice will definitely help.

Keep 'em coming!

Thanks man, im working on my voice and also on producing beats that will fit my deliver a little more, so we'll see how that goes ^.^