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Redzek - An Artist's Life (NEW 2014)

Postby Le Tunisien » Jun 16th, '14, 17:21

Check this out, hope you enjoy it

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Re: Redzek - An Artist's Life (NEW 2014)

Postby yung rom » Jun 16th, '14, 22:19

Damnnnn. First off, dope cover and extremely dope beat. Your voice sounds sick with it too, only thing I could recommend is some kind of pop filter (if you're not already using on) so the s's stop cracking so much. Also, I might be wrong, but at times it seemed like your rhyme track or any background layers weren't in sync with the main vocal track. Chorus were extremely dope, love that whisper/sing thing you've got going on. Flow was also on point.

Overall, sick job man, I loved it :y:
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Re: Redzek - An Artist's Life (NEW 2014)

Postby Eedee » Jun 17th, '14, 01:24

_ROM_ wrote: so the s's stop cracking so much. Also, I might be wrong, but at times it seemed like your rhyme track or any background layers weren't in sync with the main vocal track. :


Pretty much this in terms of what you need to work on. But yeah, your delivery and shit was sick man. You're getting better for sure. :y:
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Re: Redzek - An Artist's Life (NEW 2014)

Postby Le Tunisien » Jun 17th, '14, 01:30

Thank You guys i truly appreciate your feedback :worship:
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Re: Redzek - An Artist's Life (NEW 2014)

Postby gutawafang » Jun 17th, '14, 03:42

Good job, :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Redzek - An Artist's Life (NEW 2014)

Postby B.A.D. » Jun 19th, '14, 04:43

bro!!!

I like the typography for Redzek, nice one

Your flow improved loooooaaaaaaddddds man, good. The writing also improved, and I love your structure. Lyrics are also great man. Its a dope job overall, dope ass hook!!!

The only actual feedback I can give you is to work on that mixing, you still sound a bit mumbled and without lyrics its a bit difficult to actually decipher what you are saying. Work on vocalising and enunciating better, try tongue twisters and shit like that, practice your speaking. In regards to mixing, try to level your dynamic range a bit more to the lower side, there is too much high crackle.

but this is definitively dope

I'll hook u up with some more beats


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Re: Redzek - An Artist's Life (NEW 2014)

Postby mdemaz » Jun 19th, '14, 13:42

man good shit brotha keep it up man

fuck yeah
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Re: Redzek - An Artist's Life (NEW 2014)

Postby Le Tunisien » Jun 20th, '14, 22:15

gutawafang wrote:Good job, :y: :y: :y:

Thanks dude :8) :8)

B.A.D. wrote:bro!!!

I like the typography for Redzek, nice one

Your flow improved loooooaaaaaaddddds man, good. The writing also improved, and I love your structure. Lyrics are also great man. Its a dope job overall, dope ass hook!!!

The only actual feedback I can give you is to work on that mixing, you still sound a bit mumbled and without lyrics its a bit difficult to actually decipher what you are saying. Work on vocalising and enunciating better, try tongue twisters and shit like that, practice your speaking. In regards to mixing, try to level your dynamic range a bit more to the lower side, there is too much high crackle.

but this is definitively dope

I'll hook u up with some more beats


sick ass flow


Thanks alot for this in depth feedback, i know about the mixing thats normal, i did not mix it at all lol, i just used noise gate of fruity loops and thats it lol was too lazy to mix plus i dont even know how to mix using FL, and yes ill try to work harder on the enuniciating and im glad you liked it you'r appreciated!

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fuck yeah


haha thanks man, im glad to hear that you liked it, thank you !
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Re: Redzek - An Artist's Life (NEW 2014)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Jun 21st, '14, 21:17

I would just work on mixing like said above. Flow sometimes is a bit off the hinges, but when you slow it down you nail it. Your voice is unique, the accent was kind of tough for me to get past but that's just personally. I couldn't understand a decent bit of what you were saying though man, sometimes the words seemed jumbled or that they ran on together. The lyrics helped me flesh it out a bit though. You did a good job with some of the melodic flows though, and the hook is pretty dope. Keep at It mane.
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Re: Redzek - An Artist's Life (NEW 2014)

Postby Le Tunisien » Jun 26th, '14, 15:15

Thank you guys for the feedback :worship: :worship: :worship:
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