ROM - Freshmen Suck

[Mr.DGAF]

The bridge is siiiiick dude. Haha, the rest of the song is pretty good as well, the hook is catchy and shit. I really like your voice, you remind me a bit of 'The Joker', that guy that did the Hopsin diss tracks a while back. Sometimes I couldn't hear you all that well, but I don't think that was you slurring or anything, so idk. Definitely a cool track to kick back to and vibe with, you've got a really distinct sound and it suits you well.

[MistaVijilantee]

Vocals are a bit distorted - was that intentional? - because it works quite well for some reason.
I've got freshman suck thing stuck in my head now, thx alot m8.
It was cool how you bended the rhymes here: '‘Cause if I’m making a single and calling it “freshmen suck”
It’s gotta be true enough, or else it is offensive' - I could hear some Eminem influence?
The layering is dank as a motherfucker in the bridge, end bit.
Swiggity swooty.

[yung rom]

Just got around to listening to the song and it's way better than I expected. Good stuff man. Your rhyming and content was dope and the flow was pretty smooth. Nice beat and cool hook too. Mad props bro

Haha thank you so much!

The bridge is siiiiick dude. Haha, the rest of the song is pretty good as well, the hook is catchy and shit. I really like your voice, you remind me a bit of 'The Joker', that guy that did the Hopsin diss tracks a while back. Sometimes I couldn't hear you all that well, but I don't think that was you slurring or anything, so idk. Definitely a cool track to kick back to and vibe with, you've got a really distinct sound and it suits you well.

Thanks man. And yeah, I've heard a lot of the Jokerr, got a couple of his albums last year. I think the hearing thing is part of the delivery, as I originally intended this to be mixed down with two other layers. Once I deleted them (because it made the words a lot less clear) I didn't have time to re-record because I was sick and needed to release this before my classes ended. I might re-record another time though haha, we'll see.

Vocals are a bit distorted - was that intentional? - because it works quite well for some reason.
I've got freshman suck thing stuck in my head now, thx alot m8.
It was cool how you bended the rhymes here: '‘Cause if I’m making a single and calling it “freshmen suck”
It’s gotta be true enough, or else it is offensive' - I could hear some Eminem influence?
The layering is dank as a motherfucker in the bridge, end bit.
Swiggity swooty.

Vocals might be a bit distorted because I cranked the volume past the limited export volume because it was too quiet, so there's a bit of distortion crackly stuff at some points. And yeah, totally some Eminem influence, I'm on an Eminem forum after all haha. My dad liked the bridge too.

Thank you everyone for the feedback!

[Jaba]

Damn fucking awesome! Love that ur making new shit again! If u can edit soundcloud and make it have a download. I want this song! haha

[yung rom]

Damn fucking awesome! Love that ur making new shit again! If u can edit soundcloud and make it have a download. I want this song! haha

haha thank you!! Btw, I don't think I'm gonna put the download on that because it's from my album which I want to be downloaded as a whole.

[Vettori]

I certainly enjoyed it a lot, Highly entertaining. What's great is you experiment with your voice a lot, Breaking through that barrier is important, you can manipulate an entire language in rhyme. Work on the vocal sound quality
It's super inexpensive to get a decent sounding studio setup. Keep having fun like this.

If you get a chance, check out my latest song posted in the audio section

[yung rom]

I certainly enjoyed it a lot, Highly entertaining. What's great is you experiment with your voice a lot, Breaking through that barrier is important, you can manipulate an entire language in rhyme. Work on the vocal sound quality
It's super inexpensive to get a decent sounding studio setup. Keep having fun like this.

If you get a chance, check out my latest song posted in the audio section

Thank you man, and not only did I check out your song, I checked out some old stuff of yours on soundcloud. You're mad dope man! Guess I forgot to give some feedback on here though haha, mb mb. I was hoping we could try to get you on the TR album but I didn't know if you'd be down for something like that

[Jaba]

Damn fucking awesome! Love that ur making new shit again! If u can edit soundcloud and make it have a download. I want this song! haha

haha thank you!! Btw, I don't think I'm gonna put the download on that because it's from my album which I want to be downloaded as a whole.

K. Got a date for your album?

[yung rom]

Damn fucking awesome! Love that ur making new shit again! If u can edit soundcloud and make it have a download. I want this song! haha

haha thank you!! Btw, I don't think I'm gonna put the download on that because it's from my album which I want to be downloaded as a whole.

K. Got a date for your album?

Not yet haha. Hopefully before the end of summer but that's not looking too realistic

[Kez]

You're very good for your age.

I actually really liked this. You sound a bit too much like Em I aint gonna lie you really do sound like him, but I can live with it. I actually got more into this song the more I listened to it, normally I get bored with feeding songs and zone out by verse three.

This is really good. The multis are great. You are really good for your age. Really. The music I used to make at age 15 is much worse than this is. Very entertaining song. Chorus catchy and the ad-libs genuinely funny.

If you worked on sounding less like Em then I wouldn't be able to fault you for much at all here.

[shadyblogger]

You're very good for your age.

I actually really liked this. You sound a bit too much like Em I aint gonna lie you really do sound like him, but I can live with it. I actually got more into this song the more I listened to it, normally I get bored with feeding songs and zone out by verse three.

This is really good. The multis are great. You are really good for your age. Really. The music I used to make at age 15 is much worse than this is. Very entertaining song. Chorus catchy and the ad-libs genuinely funny.

If you worked on sounding less like Em then I wouldn't be able to fault you for much at all here.

I completely agree

[yung rom]

You're very good for your age.

I actually really liked this. You sound a bit too much like Em I aint gonna lie you really do sound like him, but I can live with it. I actually got more into this song the more I listened to it, normally I get bored with feeding songs and zone out by verse three.

This is really good. The multis are great. You are really good for your age. Really. The music I used to make at age 15 is much worse than this is. Very entertaining song. Chorus catchy and the ad-libs genuinely funny.

If you worked on sounding less like Em then I wouldn't be able to fault you for much at all here.

I'm with you on that, and that is definitely something I need to work on.
Thanks for the feedback!

[yung rom]

The song got quality, brother.

I was not this passionate about anything when I was your age nor am I now, really. Surprises me the drive some people have to get shit done especially in a hobby sense like this.

The mixing is a little iffy though, I'd say. But it sounds pretty good and is well put together and your singing is not bad either.

As far as comparing you to any of the other hundreds of nameless Youtube rappers you are one of the better ones, at least you seem to have some work ethic in ya.

Oh damn, never saw this.. Thanks based my brutha I'm actually working on mixing and starting to sort of get into reaper, future stuff will hopefully be an improvement.

[Trimss]

You're better than a lot of adult rappers I've heard. This is absolutely fantastic. Looking forward to the next song, whatever it may be.

Fuck yeah. Great hook, and great structure. I mean you can make a song, something most MC's struggle to do. Great job man.

Very catchy and shit. And you're young as fuck. I can see the potential.

[Excita]

Whew, this was amazing brah. :crying: