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Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby Jaba » Jun 29th, '14, 04:49

This is a song highly inspired by Eminem's Drug Ballad. I used a familiar beat and made some references. This song is a JOKE it is meant to be funny. This is one of the three songs I kept off the old "My Story" album concept. I have recently changed the song of my upcoming album and recorded a lot more songs and scrapped all but 3 from the old "My Story" album concept. So I chose this song to release to represent this new concept and just how the vibe/sound is. There should be 1 more single after this and then my album will be released in July or August. Anyways please reply and tell me what you think, don't take it too serious and do not get offended, this is supposed to be a joking funny song (btw this was recorded a while ago (during the "My Story concept") so some of the usernames have been changed since then). Anyways gimme some feedback and yeah. Thanks! :y:

song - https://soundcloud.com/suvivor/diss-song

LOF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=171871&start=15

LYRICS (I didnt feel like making it look nice so here is where I wrote it in my notes, also I bolded all the mentioned names):
intro -
alright…
guess what
i aint coming in yet
ill come in in a minute
hey yo, this is my diss song
it goes like this

verse 1 30 to 1:30-

back when canadapure wasn’t a prick
back when satan didn’t act like a dick
that was a trick,
he always was a dick
shit
he still is
i used to think of these times
when i could say something and not get replys
like i was committing crimes
you dimes make fun of me at the wrong time
you just keep giving me ideas for rhymes
im in my prime
my new goal is to make a song dissing everybody
this is it, this is my control
your role is shut the fuck up bitch
i shove a pole up ur asholes cus i have no soul
your all dead to me you fucking bitches
dig a hole and throw you in them ditches
but
i do show some respect to few
shit eedee and mr.dgaf is dope as fuck too
mdemaz is cool too
here i got a new rule
if ur on a track with me your cool
if your not fuck off cus ur a tool
and when i say cool I’m not being a tool
i don’t mean that gay ass strut tin around cool
all i meant was that your dope too
shit
don’t drop the soap u little faggits
whats new?
with me nowadays is nothin still hating on faggits
the antagonist no one likes on trshady?
shit now i know how hopsinshadie feels too

verse 2
in third grade all i used to do was get on the internet and listen to you
that was a mistake
your rhymes are fake
you should take that bullshit and feed em to a snake
and by the way thripleninethree yeah the hillbilly get the fuck out of this industry
i wouldn’t hire you for free you piece of shit
i shit on your videos and pee on em too
you had a dream but then it broke because of me
you look like a monkey big ear junky
enough of you
lets go bully eminemstanatic you fucking maggot i sit on you
your shit isn’t illmatic but i will say your stillafaggot
who else to take a stab at?
menzo? oh no everyone loves em
fucking picture of a girlie with boobies bouncing
he’s probably a fucking 20 year old fat addict
its tragic
the man hasn’t thought of plastic surgery but fuck it even a doctor couldn’t fix that without magic
ill be a friend
ill let you in on a little secret ill give you some advice and that is to stay away from vice until the next time he puts out a shitty ass song where he sings and raps
he can’t rap on a real beat cus if he did he’d just get beat (haha)


verse 3
thats the sound when a man takes a stand and sends out his revenge! watch out for easy-gfx he’s never had sex and he’s probably a little neat if you know what a mean so id watch out where ya seat
and if I’m not being clear he’s a nancy, which means he’s a queer beeting off to the sound of my voice at this momeant
this song was never released as a single but i still do want to see this song get a lot of views cus i want everybody to see you all get your ass beat on a lyric sheet
never meant to hurt anyones feelings
but you faggots ass pussies done pissed me off
and this is my response
and i know this song is a bit corny
fucking internet diss song to people on a website
not meant to be taken seriously
just poking fun at you cunts
if you got a problem with confront me
track me down
hack me
this is a fucking stunt
next in line move to the front
who else should I hunt
no one
for now cus
when its all said and done ill be on the internet again
browsing forums realizing theres about
70 diss song replies oh my I’m gonna get a disguise

CHORUS -
cus every time i go to try and leave
some fag keeps pulling on my sleeve
takin cheap shots at me
these words really got whole of me

cause every time i try to let it go
they take another shot at me
so watch out cus you don’t belong
in this game so heres my diss song
Last edited by Jaba on Jun 30th, '14, 22:55, edited 3 times in total.
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby mdemaz » Jun 29th, '14, 07:21

you went in bruh u destroyed dis bellend

probably just work on quality and flow and yeah homeboy

keep it up m8
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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby Jaba » Jun 30th, '14, 01:50

Barely got any feedback... :( thanks to those who did. I hope I didnt piss anyone off :(

If anyone else has feedback please post!
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby TheVipBro » Jun 30th, '14, 01:53

i think you just need to work on speaking clearer, idk how to explain myself because it is clear, just the mix of your voice, flow and delivery kinda make it harder for some to understand on first listen but yeah, good(:
keep it up brrruuuf
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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby yung rom » Jun 30th, '14, 02:06

y the diss bruh :'(
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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby TheVipBro » Jun 30th, '14, 02:07

did i get dissed? i kinda feel unimportant if i didn't
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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby Jaba » Jun 30th, '14, 02:55

TheVipBro wrote:did i get dissed? i kinda feel unimportant if i didn't

LOL I didnt know u back then
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby Jaba » Jun 30th, '14, 02:56

_ROM_ wrote:y the diss bruh :'(

LOL sorry ROM :( but tbh i picked most these disses cus of the possible rhyme and I wanted to have a Nas mention and ur name was perfect, tbh to do this song i went to audio section and went through pages to find usernames who rapped. LOL, I didnt even know ur shit back then. I was a ctually thinking about removing my diss towards u but i jus lvoed the rhyme there. Sorry:( I love u tho ROM! just not eminemstanatic... lol jk :p
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby Jaba » Jun 30th, '14, 02:57

True Wiz wrote:Puberty game strong

Thanks bruh lol idgaf
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I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby MistaVijilantee » Jun 30th, '14, 13:35

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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby Jaba » Jun 30th, '14, 13:54

True Wiz wrote:
Jaba wrote:
True Wiz wrote:Puberty game strong

Thanks bruh lol idgaf

dude chill out.. it was a joke...

? How am I not chill. I am CALM'd DOWN.
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby Eedee » Jun 30th, '14, 14:12

TripleNineThree sucks so much :laughing: :laughing:
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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby Jaba » Jun 30th, '14, 14:55

Eedee wrote:TripleNineThree sucks so much :laughing: :laughing:

lol. :D
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby cement » Jun 30th, '14, 17:10

whew you dissed the whole game
revolutionary
cool
swag
yolo
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Re: Diss Song - Jaba - Off my newly Untitled Album

Postby Jaba » Jun 30th, '14, 22:51

Hage wrote:post the lyrics breh

On main page
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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