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Pixel - Broken Homes

Postby Pixel » Jul 7th, '14, 11:45

Here's my new song that i wrote, performed and produced, its an epic dark track about drug abuse, check it out!

Link: http://youtu.be/jhY33A6UmCU

Feedback: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=171957
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Re: Pixel - Broken Homes

Postby Aslawik » Jul 7th, '14, 22:10

I have a similar song and I feel I relate. Pains real.. lyrics affects cool too
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Re: Pixel - Broken Homes

Postby Supershade » Jul 7th, '14, 22:26

Sounds off
Cause I can’t explain to y’all how dang exhausted my legs felt, just having to balance my dang self but on eggshells I was made to walk but thank you, ma, ‘cause that gave me the strength to cause Shady-mania
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Postby Pixel » Jul 8th, '14, 04:45

Supershade wrote:Sounds off


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Postby MistaVijilantee » Jul 10th, '14, 10:56

Great lyrics, mic quality isn't too bad.
My only critique would be to put a bit more expression in your voice - this usually comes with practice - also the chorus is good :y:
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Re: Pixel - Broken Homes

Postby Pixel » Jul 10th, '14, 15:08

MistaVijilantee wrote:Great lyrics, mic quality isn't too bad.
My only critique would be to put a bit more expression in your voice - this usually comes with practice - also the chorus is good :y:
Glad to see a fellow Aussie?


Thanks for the feedback ^.^

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Postby Mr.DGAF » Jul 16th, '14, 05:40

I really like the lyrics here dude. That was the standout for me on the song. Your delivery could use some practice; your flow isn't terrible, but sometimes you cram syllables and that causes you to slur some words/makes it hard to understand. Mic quality wasn't great, it sounded kinda crispy (if that makes sense (it probably doesn't)). There were points where the beat overpowered the vocals too. Just work on delivery and maybe some punch in's to help the flow on some of those rushed parts.
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Re: Pixel - Broken Homes

Postby Pixel » Jul 18th, '14, 03:43

Mr.DGAF wrote:I really like the lyrics here dude. That was the standout for me on the song. Your delivery could use some practice; your flow isn't terrible, but sometimes you cram syllables and that causes you to slur some words/makes it hard to understand. Mic quality wasn't great, it sounded kinda crispy (if that makes sense (it probably doesn't)). There were points where the beat overpowered the vocals too. Just work on delivery and maybe some punch in's to help the flow on some of those rushed parts.


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