Internal Doubts

[azz]

I've just recorded my first ever track and was wondering if you guys could take a listen and give me some feedback. I'm from the UK if you're wondering what my accent is.

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https://soundcloud.com/t49/sets/test


Lyrics:

Look you won't do it stop wasting your time right
Don't pursue it stop chasing the limelight
It's blind faith and delusion, look
Realities here and your losing touch with it

Yeah you got line, but so did plenty other guys
At the end of the day they never got signed
So why are you gonna?
What separates you and your bars from the rest of the new comers?

Don't you see how the odds are against you?
What you gonna do when the bills and the rents due?
You're fucking around, quit playing these games
You need to buckle it down, you need to stay in your lane

Take a 9-5 and you can stick to that
You're a fool if you think you can stick to rap
You're a fool if you think you're ever gonna blow
Gonna go hard, nah trust, you aint ever gonna go far

The high life you aint destined for sir
So what's the point in even testing water?
It's sink or swim & you bound to drown
They gon' think of him, they gon' count him out

See, a rapper from Wigan that's a rare thing
For a reason, no don't you dare swing
I'm just giving you a few little home truths
After all, who else you gonna go to?

You can't kid yourself and you hate that
I mean, why do you even wanna make tracks.
All you're capable of penning is lackluster lines
Who really wanna hear this wack buster rhyme?

There comes a time you gotta sit back
Just admit you're shit you can't rip tracks
It's just better for us both that you realise
Yea, dreams are nice but this is real life.