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Vettori- Save Myself

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Vettori- Save Myself

Postby Vettori » Jul 28th, '14, 16:01

https://soundcloud.com/daniel-king-23/save-myself

I just wrote and recorded this with another song on here called In The End. I hope you all enjoy it.

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Re: Vettori- Save Myself

Postby TonyTilt » Jul 28th, '14, 18:14

Dude this is really nice! Props!
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Re: Vettori- Save Myself

Postby Mr.DGAF » Jul 28th, '14, 19:09

Damn, this is one of the best songs I've heard in audio stage in a while. No complaints man, very smooth and laid back listening. Good stuff.
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Re: Vettori- Save Myself

Postby Eedee » Jul 29th, '14, 23:00

That was really fucking sick. Loved the voice, mixing, lyrics, everything. Really spot on. Hurry up and drop a project so I can put this on my iPod lol

The only thing I noticed, and it's a really really tiny detail, but at the end of your bars sometimes (like the "morning sun" one) you kinda falter off and don't fully complete your word, or it's with a really different delivery and it threw me off when I first heard it. It's a really small nitpick and doesn't change the quality of the song at all. Just something I noticed.

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Re: Vettori- Save Myself

Postby TripleNineThree » Jul 30th, '14, 01:58

Wow!
Mixing was incredible. The singing sounded good and the echoes fit it really well.

Then you started rapping and the quality did not drop at all. It flowed really well, I don't think I noticed any times that you fell off. You have a unique sound and the fact that you can both sing and rap is really good. I also loved the depth of the track, I could tell you were wrestling with some things - those are the best kinds of songs. Keep it up man! :y:
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Re: Vettori- Save Myself

Postby Jaba » Jul 30th, '14, 03:02

This is fucking incredible! Maybe you could do a guest verse on my album? PM me OP if ur interested please.
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Vettori- Save Myself

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Jul 31st, '14, 00:02

I can't say a bad thing about this. It sounded very professional and clean. Great job, man. This is definitely a song I could see myself listening to just on my own time. Again, great job on it. :y:
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Re: Vettori- Save Myself

Postby Spyder » Jul 31st, '14, 05:26

Amazing man, I though When the Ship Goes Down was great, this is beyond that. Literally everything is impecible. Can't wait to hear more.
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Re: Vettori- Save Myself

Postby Vettori » Jul 31st, '14, 18:57

Thank you all so very much, Ive been going through some hard times & have been using music as the tool to help me. I'm sorry I dnt come on much but I do like to stop by once in a while to see how everyone has been. I'm more grateful than any of you know for these comments. It helps my fire to keep burning. PM me any of your work and Ill do my best to check it ut. I'm not often on a computer so my apolgies for the lengthy response time. Add me on facebook (Daniel King)
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Re: Vettori- Save Myself

Postby yung rom » Aug 1st, '14, 01:32

Damn. This is incredible. Awesome instrumental, awesome lyrics, awesome mixing, everything. Your flow is perfect with the beat too. Keep at it man! :y:
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