I loved the way you flowed on this track. It had a layback feel to it and it fit the style of both the beat and the chorus. The way you matched your style to the beat/concept was probably my favorite part.
One of the negative things on the track is the way your voice is mixed. It's not too big of a deal because the mixing is actually really good on parts (such as the parts you double up your voice) but it sounds like your voice could be a little more crisp and higher quality if that makes sense.
Your lyrics all sounded really good. You had some good multis and none of them felt too forced at all, they went together well.
Overall this was a solid song, it definitely has replay value. Great job!