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Re: Elision 2014

Postby Elision » Nov 24th, '14, 00:37

FriedSchizoprenic wrote:Rap is more complex than just multis. Got other aspects like puns (Which for me is harder putting puns than rhyming words), wordplay general, subject matter, storytelling, humor, flow changes, variety, atsmophere, etc.

But i didnt know you was conscious of that, because i see a lot of lyrical myracle rappers doing that and saying "LOOK BRO I AM BETTER THAN LIL WAYNE LOOK HOW MANY WORDS I RHYMEE!!!1111".
oh haha nah man i'm totally aware of what i'm doing here, it's just what i prefer. i'm capable of almost any type of rap. that said there were a ton of flow changes here. humor as well. keep in mind Master Chief made the same point last time i posted here. i appreciate the honest feedback regardless.
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with this nose i don't need a torch up
bustin through, light the industry's porsche up
comin after who didn't support us...
imma change your brain bring
every wicked bit of strange to mainstream
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Re: Elision 2014

Postby FriedSchizoprenic » Nov 24th, '14, 00:42

Elision wrote:
FriedSchizoprenic wrote:Rap is more complex than just multis. Got other aspects like puns (Which for me is harder putting puns than rhyming words), wordplay general, subject matter, storytelling, humor, flow changes, variety, atsmophere, etc.

But i didnt know you was conscious of that, because i see a lot of lyrical myracle rappers doing that and saying "LOOK BRO I AM BETTER THAN LIL WAYNE LOOK HOW MANY WORDS I RHYMEE!!!1111".
oh haha nah man i'm totally aware of what i'm doing here, it's just what i prefer. i'm capable of almost any type of rap. that said there were a ton of flow changes here. humor as well. keep in mind Master Chief made the same point last time i posted here. i appreciate the honest feedback regardless.

Yeah i know, in the flow aspect you are great doe :y:
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hi bro i have a question do you got a problem like a problem i can resolve what you mean you are going to punch me bro i just want to see aaaah aaaah stop stop is a prank is a praaaaaaaaank
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Re: Elision 2014

Postby Mr.DGAF » Nov 28th, '14, 22:29

love the flows here. dope stuff mane. would like to hear you on a beat in the near future breh.
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