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Elision 2014

Postby Elision » Oct 28th, '14, 15:48

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=174524

avoided posting here for the last 3 years since master chief fucked me up for a while after this viewtopic.php?f=38&t=133492 hopefully this'll satisfy you faggots.

this year's acapella installment


i miss a bar near the end it was supposed to be:
you mufuckas don't want nothin, i'm fucked up man
i'm bum rushin a bum russian, so what suck it
i come bustin this combustion and fucks love it
i come dumpin with one punch i could crush lundgren
i'm comin in, drivin my short bus
with this nose i don't need a torch up
bustin through, light the industry's porsche up
comin after who didn't support us...
imma change your brain bring
every wicked bit of strange to mainstream
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Re: Elision 2014

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 28th, '14, 16:11

First, Fiiiiiiirrrrrrreeee

also lol @
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Re: Elision 2014

Postby yoda you can call me » Oct 28th, '14, 21:36

Wow, Dem fucking syllables. Good fucking shit hombre :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Elision 2014

Postby Rafael » Oct 28th, '14, 21:42

Better than 90% of the rappers you listen to.
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Re: Elision 2014

Postby Jaba » Oct 28th, '14, 22:12

Did. YOU GOT TALENT. But you really need to stop biting TECH N9NE (of all people). So much. I listened to your cypher, both sound very similar. Maybe try rapping slower?

Biting people or not, your probably still one of the best (if you come back) TR rapper's out right now.

edit - advice for next time. dont record yourself with a camera :facepalm
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Re: Elision 2014

Postby yoda you can call me » Oct 28th, '14, 22:18

Jaba wrote:Did. YOU GOT TALENT. But you really need to stop biting TECH N9NE (of all people). So much. I listened to your cypher, both sound very similar. Maybe try rapping slower?

Biting people or not, your probably still one of the best (if you come back) TR rapper's out right now.

edit - advice for next time. dont record yourself with a camera :facepalm

Jealous much?

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Re: Elision 2014

Postby Vice » Oct 28th, '14, 22:30

Some talent in the writing there but I was hearing a lotta bitten rhymes and patterns (and not just the lines you referenced from classic songs)

For example..

3:05 in your song sounded completely ripped from:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g1lgUwHyKQQ

3:45

I think you'd have something pretty legit tho if you were to find your own style. Also, writing a legit song is much diff than writing a random freestyle. This lacked substance imo

Don't take offense tho, clearly you can put the words together, just need to put more behind what's being said
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Re: Elision 2014

Postby Jaba » Oct 28th, '14, 22:54

Yoda wrote:
Jaba wrote:Did. YOU GOT TALENT. But you really need to stop biting TECH N9NE (of all people). So much. I listened to your cypher, both sound very similar. Maybe try rapping slower?

Biting people or not, your probably still one of the best (if you come back) TR rapper's out right now.

edit - advice for next time. dont record yourself with a camera :facepalm

Jealous much?

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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Elision 2014

Postby yoda you can call me » Oct 28th, '14, 23:49

Jaba wrote:
Yoda wrote:
Jaba wrote:Did. YOU GOT TALENT. But you really need to stop biting TECH N9NE (of all people). So much. I listened to your cypher, both sound very similar. Maybe try rapping slower?

Biting people or not, your probably still one of the best (if you come back) TR rapper's out right now.

edit - advice for next time. dont record yourself with a camera :facepalm

Jealous much?

:shifty:

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Re: Elision 2014

Postby shadyblogger » Oct 29th, '14, 06:45

And the place got quiet...
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Re: Elision 2014

Postby Elision » Oct 29th, '14, 14:55

Vice wrote:Some talent in the writing there but I was hearing a lotta bitten rhymes and patterns (and not just the lines you referenced from classic songs)

For example..

3:05 in your song sounded completely ripped from:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g1lgUwHyKQQ
I wasn't ripping off em, it was a direct quote from Worldwide Choppers' final verse http://youtu.be/0GhbkrOg9gA?t=5m8s i took the opening bar and pulled it the opposite direction, figured it'd be obvious.
Jaba wrote:edit - advice for next time. dont record yourself with a camera :facepalm
I do it for the acapellas, makes them feel more raw than just audio. also shows that it's all one take.
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Re: Elision 2014

Postby Hage » Oct 29th, '14, 15:17

You looked different from what I expected,sound different from what i expected and now i found out that you say your name differently from what i expected.
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Re: Elision 2014

Postby Jaba » Oct 29th, '14, 17:52

Elision wrote:
Vice wrote:Some talent in the writing there but I was hearing a lotta bitten rhymes and patterns (and not just the lines you referenced from classic songs)

For example..

3:05 in your song sounded completely ripped from:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g1lgUwHyKQQ
I wasn't ripping off em, it was a direct quote from Worldwide Choppers' final verse http://youtu.be/0GhbkrOg9gA?t=5m8s i took the opening bar and pulled it the opposite direction, figured it'd be obvious.
Jaba wrote:edit - advice for next time. dont record yourself with a camera :facepalm
I do it for the acapellas, makes them feel more raw than just audio. also shows that it's all one take.

Oh ok thats cool.

And for the video, i take that back. You actually look pretty bad ass when ur rapping. Sorta like a physco but idk. I like the vids. :y:

Hopefully you post some songs, your good. :y:
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In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
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Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Elision 2014

Postby DetroitSkills » Oct 30th, '14, 06:44

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Re: Elision 2014

Postby mdemaz » Oct 30th, '14, 06:47

was dope af

I dunno what people are talking about fucking bitter desensitized cynical cuntstains
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