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Vice - "Δ" Official Thread

Postby Vice » Oct 28th, '13, 16:20

Δ by Vice

1) xxxxxxx

2) xxxxxxx

3) The Maze: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h3VtfPf_5PI

4) Until Next Time: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PmN3cwr91YA

5) xxxxxxxxx

Coming December, 2014
Last edited by Vice on Dec 25th, '13, 08:45, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Vice - "The Maze"

Postby TripleNineThree » Oct 28th, '13, 19:13

I have to get going so I don't have time to leave detailed feedback but wow, this is really dope. I actually replayed it, that does not happen very often with songs on TR. Great job man!
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Re: Vice - "The Maze"

Postby -AKA- » Oct 29th, '13, 02:48

Yea I like this man. Delivery is top notch. Sounds really clean, flow is on point.
Hook is pretty cool. Lyrically nice too. Did u make the beat aswell? Fits the song nicely. Beat is done well too
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Re: Vice - "The Maze"

Postby mdemaz » Oct 29th, '13, 05:09

Gonna say this now while I can.

You obviously know what you are doing, and, that will come in handy in the future.
Whatever project you will be working on will need that extra time, though.
You'll wanna make sure that you'll craft your project to perfection.

At the moment, it seems like you have spent extensive amounts of time on this rap thing, and, if you are really serious about this, you should go through with putting yourself out there.
Don't be afraid to use social media, hand out CDs, and use word of mouth.

Alright, take it easy.

Keep up the good work.
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Re: Vice - "The Maze"

Postby Eedee » Oct 29th, '13, 07:40

I liked it a lot. Not much else I can say that hasn't already been said.
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Re: Vice - "The Maze"

Postby Vice » Oct 29th, '13, 16:48

TripleNineThree wrote:I have to get going so I don't have time to leave detailed feedback but wow, this is really dope. I actually replayed it, that does not happen very often with songs on TR. Great job man!


Thank you! I’m glad you replayed it, hopefully it became easier to grasp with each listen.

-AKA- wrote:Yea I like this man. Delivery is top notch. Sounds really clean, flow is on point.
Hook is pretty cool. Lyrically nice too. Did u make the beat aswell? Fits the song nicely. Beat is done well too
Dope man


Nope I didn't produce the beat but I mixed the vocals into it. When I saw that the instrumental for Big Sean’s “Beware” was available to the public I had to jump on it. Thanks for the listen, glad you can appreciate the writing.

mdemaz wrote:Gonna say this now while I can.

You obviously know what you are doing, and, that will come in handy in the future.
Whatever project you will be working on will need that extra time, though.
You'll wanna make sure that you'll craft your project to perfection.

At the moment, it seems like you have spent extensive amounts of time on this rap thing, and, if you are really serious about this, you should go through with putting yourself out there.
Don't be afraid to use social media, hand out CDs, and use word of mouth.

Alright, take it easy.

Keep up the good work.


This post meant a lot. I’m actually going to medical school in January, but I’m hoping to finish and release an EP by then (or a mix tape, whatever this qualifies as). I put a lot of time into each line on a song, so you’re spot on. Thank you for the tips dude, I hope you continue to appreciate my work!

Eedee wrote:I liked it a lot. Not much else I can say that hasn't already been said.


Thank you for the feedback Eedee.
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Re: Vice - "The Maze"

Postby Vice » Nov 10th, '13, 03:07

Thanks everyone, new stuff coming soon
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Re: Vice - "The Maze"

Postby Boston » Nov 10th, '13, 03:47

Good shit bro. I dropped in this section years back and you would of been top 4 on this site judging on this track alone. I would like to hear more from you so i can geta broader feel and offer some constructive critism
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Re: Vice - "The Maze"

Postby Kangol » Nov 13th, '13, 22:31

sorry for the bump but this is dopee GJ
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Re: Vice - "The Maze"

Postby Ellustrate » Nov 17th, '13, 02:39

I was not expecting the skill you have when the beat first turned on. Only thing I can say is maybe make your vocals more warm and full sounding. Other than, it was fucking dope man! :8)
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Re: Vice - "The Maze"

Postby Vice » Dec 23rd, '13, 17:46

Boston wrote:Good shit bro. I dropped in this section years back and you would of been top 4 on this site judging on this track alone. I would like to hear more from you so i can geta broader feel and offer some constructive critism

That's awesome to hear. New stuff coming soon (I have a mixtape with 5 songs I will be releasing slowly, and soon)

Kangol wrote:sorry for the bump but this is dopee GJ

No need to apologize, I appreciate the feedback and the bump! stay tuned for more new shit coming soon

Re-mixed, final cut for the mixtape:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h3VtfPf_5PI

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Vice - "Until Next Time"

Postby Vice » Jan 12th, '14, 18:11

third song off my upcoming mixtape called "Δ":

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PmN3cwr91YA

as always any feedback is appreciated

my feedback (updated): viewtopic.php?f=38&t=168635&p=2551559#p2551559

(Eedee you can merge the two threads or edit it so it's formatted correctly into one thread but I couldn't edit the other one since you closed it)
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Re: Vice - "Until Next Time"

Postby MistaVijilantee » Jan 15th, '14, 09:39

Ha, this is smooth as fuck.
The harmonies work well most of the time, they're nice and laid back without being to "look at me I can sing a few notes", like you're not trying to hard just going where the beat takes you or some philosophical shit like that.
Rhyme schemes were nice. Overall pretty good.
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Re: Vice - "Until Next Time"

Postby Eedee » Jan 16th, '14, 17:15

Haha this was very chill. You have a dope flow, man.

That hook was really fucking chill. Chill. Chill. Chill. And catchy. Did I mention, chill?
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Re: Vice - "Until Next Time"

Postby cityfan31 » Jan 17th, '14, 17:33

Wow, this was really good.

You sound great, good melodic control too.

Damn, I really wish I didn't have a british accent. It's killed my rapping career before it even started! :laughing:
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