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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby Eedee » Nov 10th, '14, 02:48

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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby Atone » Nov 10th, '14, 03:11

1. Nobody has ever compared you to Eminem and never will

2. i pretty much laughed throughout the whole song,

3. i just noticed you dissed me in a line, fan fucking tastic,

4. i know i'm not all that great compared to others on TR but holy shit, you sound weak as fuck dude, normally i would comment respectfully and be nice about it but since you've been onthis site you've been a dipshit asshole and until you show me respect i aint about to respect you, so, here's my opinion, don't record another song until you learn how to not sound so nervous, stuttery and dumb as shit, your voice cracks like 50 times in this song, which makes me laugh hard every time, you even whisper (like i used to) and you just sound so damn try hard, you don't sound natural at all, you just sound like you walked to a friends house one day while listening to rap music, he had a microphone by his computer and you was like "hey let me try this"

stop, study the music, and then write,

and don't be so hype to diss people, your friends are gonna listen to this (probably laughing) and ask "who the fuck is Atone?" your friends don't know who i am, that was a wasted line, rap about you8r life, not an internet forum that 90% of your friends have never been to,

ALSO your disds to me could backfire on you anyways, since i'm ALOT better than you, your friends might hear you say my name, ask you who i am, you tell em and show em my music and it makes you look even lamer, stupid shit,
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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby mdemaz » Nov 10th, '14, 03:14

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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby Eedee » Nov 10th, '14, 03:21

If the flaming doesn't stop (this goes for everyone in here lol), I'ma have to lock this. Don't make me lock this.
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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby mdemaz » Nov 10th, '14, 03:25

Lock it, faggot.
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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby Eedee » Nov 10th, '14, 03:27

mdemaz wrote:Lock it, faggot.


I'm giving it a chance, but I may have to haha. So much salt in here.
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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby Eedee » Nov 10th, '14, 03:30

Or I could give out warnings for displaying the salt when this thread has got its daily amount of sodium already.

(And I'll properly PM people this time, I'm sorry Based :'( )
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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby Atone » Nov 10th, '14, 03:49

Now i see why everybody got mad whenever i said "i'm just doin it for fun fuck your opinion"

Jaba, chill man, stop being an asshole and maybe some of us will respect you,

as i said, you sound like i did when i first started, the whispering and all that, i still have alot to learn but i got a little better and you can to if you don't act like such a dickhead,
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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby Eedee » Nov 10th, '14, 03:54

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Eedee wrote:Or I could give out warnings for displaying the salt when this thread has got its daily amount of sodium already.

(And I'll properly PM people this time, I'm sorry Based :'( )

Out of all the threads you could have chosen to moderate. You chose this one.


There's just a lot of flaming (and legit feedback/criticism tbh), let's just try to keep the flaming to a minimum, please. That goes for everyone, just not you, man. :y:
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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby Eedee » Nov 10th, '14, 03:55

True Wiz wrote:Eedee, I'm gonna flame like the human torch.

Nobody should strive for music to be their job. You should always have stable ground to fall back on. My music project is nothing but a hobby, but the difference between you and I, is that I'm taking the time to work on my craft. It's cool that you're making music, that's fine with me. I see an issue when you take offense to people calling your music shit. If you're not dedicating sufficient time to work on your craft, then you should suspect negative feedback.


That's also not flaming. It's good advice. :smoking:
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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby SarkingMajor » Nov 10th, '14, 07:12

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Jaba wrote:Its not hard. Its just hard to get people to like your flow.

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Wiz, focus on your beats and not me. If you dont like me, dont listen to me, all i can say. Im doin this shit for fun, so whether people like it or not im still gonna do it in my spare time for the hell of it. Focus on those beats if your gonna do that shit for a job cus what ive heard their wack. If ur doin it for fun tho, cool. Shit balls ass.


Come on man, we both know thats not true. Wiz is wack? Come off it. Also dont post to a public forum and start crying when you get feedback.

SarkingMajor is my new homie :b:


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I'd work on your delivery a little though. Your flow was amazing in some parts man :y:

You could be the new Luna C in a few years


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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby mdemaz » Nov 10th, '14, 07:37

Seriously though, this is unbearable and I feel bad for you.

You make the 2011 me sound like Slug.
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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby SarkingMajor » Nov 10th, '14, 08:30

Seriously guys you might wanna stop or he'll diss you... You'll get #rekt
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True Wiz wrote:Damn, SarkingMajor can out rap half of you TR rappers :whew:

I'd work on your delivery a little though. Your flow was amazing in some parts man :y:

You could be the new Luna C in a few years


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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby MUSIC_FEIN » Nov 18th, '14, 19:00

First off, pretty dope artwork for the song.

Definitely could use a better mic and mixing, that would improve the song a whole lot.

Anyways I think the flow isn't bad, but the presence and delivery could be worked on more.

Keep grinding man!
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Re: Back to The Rhyme (Single off my upcoming EP)

Postby -AKA- » Nov 21st, '14, 04:36

DetroitSkills wrote:Cover > song.



That cover is niiiiice. You got a lot to work on. Delivery,flow, and confidence dude

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