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Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

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Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 13th, '14, 10:19

This is a very personal song, i chose to share it, and even include it in my next tape which is coming out soon, entitled " "LivingTo Die" , i wrote and recorded this song as a tribute to my uncle who deserves so much respect, he died to tumor /kidney problem , fought bravely during 30 years, and only this year his body gave up , god rest his soul.







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Re: Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby Jaba » Nov 13th, '14, 21:47

I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!
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Re: Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby Eedee » Nov 15th, '14, 07:45

Yeah the hook isn't all that great, but the content in the song was very touching. Had some good schemes in there and I could feel the grief in your voice. RIP to your uncle, buddy.
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Re: Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby mdemaz » Nov 15th, '14, 09:39

Jaba wrote:I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!

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Re: Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby DetroitSkills » Nov 15th, '14, 10:43

mdemaz wrote:
Jaba wrote:I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!

http://jaba24.bandcamp.com/track/i-hate-you

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Re: Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 15th, '14, 11:37

mdemaz wrote:
Jaba wrote:I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!

http://jaba24.bandcamp.com/track/i-hate-you

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Re: Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby MistaVijilantee » Nov 15th, '14, 14:41

mdemaz wrote:
Jaba wrote:I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!

http://jaba24.bandcamp.com/track/i-hate-you


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Re: Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby Jaba » Nov 15th, '14, 15:06

mdemaz wrote:
Jaba wrote:I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!

http://jaba24.bandcamp.com/track/i-hate-you
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby SarkingMajor » Nov 15th, '14, 16:18

mdemaz wrote:
Jaba wrote:I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!

http://jaba24.bandcamp.com/track/i-hate-you


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Re: Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 16th, '14, 09:20

ok chill guys haha :smoking: back on the main subject...feedbacks please !
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Re: Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby Atone » Nov 19th, '14, 12:08

Ignore Jaba, i don't think he should be giving anybody rap lessons at this point

but i think this is good, you have a great voice, idk if you ever heard of Brown Boy, but you sound like him

i also like the beat on this, it's great for a tribute song
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Re: Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 19th, '14, 13:11

Atone wrote:Ignore Jaba, i don't think he should be giving anybody rap lessons at this point

but i think this is good, you have a great voice, idk if you ever heard of Brown Boy, but you sound like him

i also like the beat on this, it's great for a tribute song

thats atone :worship:
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Re: Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby MUSIC_FEIN » Nov 19th, '14, 18:24

Great beat choice for this, it fit the song well.

I really liked this, very personal and relatable. The hook and overall song would have actually been really good with better mixing. Keep it up man!
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Re: Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 20th, '14, 07:34

MUSIC_FEIN wrote:Great beat choice for this, it fit the song well.

I really liked this, very personal and relatable. The hook and overall song would have actually been really good with better mixing. Keep it up man!

im glad you liked it dude, yes im sure i could have done better, this wasnt even mixed at all :y:
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