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Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby Eedee » Nov 18th, '14, 03:31

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=174976#p2840504

https://soundcloud.com/eedeemusic/chips ... yth-wonder

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Chips Down (Freestyle)
Prod. by Pyth Wonder

[Verse 1]
Back up on my grind like it never really stopped
But the pen got hot so I dropped it, aw shit
People sayin' I don't got the conscience
It's nonsense, all it do when I'm chillin'
In my ride with a homie, spark it up like
I'm in the zone so I'm spittin' the flames, son
Like a dragon, or like I'm preachin' to a Baptist
Right wing clipped? Vine that shit
You a Tinder left, so cry, fat bitch ...
I'm the same yet different, I'll get your head trippin
I'm Mila Kunis hot, you ugly - Meg Griffin
Or Chris with chip and Twinkies with a pinky up
Fat rolls hidin' your dick? You ain't missin' much
So when you lie with your bitch and you're kissin' her
You can try for the win, you still the listener
You still the listener
I'm the artist with a paint brush
The page a canvas, but you can't touch it
Move on if you can't budge it
Don't kid yourself with that tantrum
Cause I've set power at maximum, can't be touched
God dammit I'm cancerous, panther blood
Runs through me like LeBron in the paint
And shit gets real if you saw all the fakes
Or saw off your limbs, you seem stumped at my flow
But if you don't know that I'm a bird of prey
I may ruffle some feathers
But such is the settin' I'm in, heaven has sent
Me but never again will I back down
This class clown ain't a joke, so get loud
Man this kid is hot, Chris, put your chips down
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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby Jaba » Nov 18th, '14, 03:37

u sound like a fagot @ duh beginning bruh
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You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby DetroitSkills » Nov 18th, '14, 03:39

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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby Eedee » Nov 18th, '14, 03:42

Jaba wrote:u sound like a fagot @ duh beginning bruh


you sound like a fagot throughout your entire songs, so dang :coffee:
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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby Jaba » Nov 18th, '14, 03:43

Jaba wrote:u sound like a fagot @ duh beginning bruh

lol

but nah. im liking it.

but id like it better if ud try to do something really striving away from the eminem influence. i showed u 2 some ppl and they say u sound too much like eminem.

also, on ur next album id like to hear something way different, different flows/beats and shit. maybe stop getting so many beats form pyth and widen u selection, try 2 hop on some shit u'd think u'd never hop on. may turn to be a masterpiece or a bunch of shit? but u need to get out of ur comfort zone, sound like eminem or not (i dont personally think u do too much) u have been doing the same type of shit on ur past 4 projects.
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby Eedee » Nov 18th, '14, 03:47

Word, I feel ya. Well, my next album is gonna be all produced by one guy that isn't Python, and it's gonna be different. This is just a one-off freestyle, and imo it kinda shied away from what I normally sound like. There's nothing emo :]
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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby Jaba » Nov 18th, '14, 03:50

Eedee wrote:Word, I feel ya. Well, my next album is gonna be all produced by one guy that isn't Python, and it's gonna be different. This is just a one-off freestyle, and imo it kinda shied away from what I normally sound like. There's nothing emo :]

K cool

but try to change ur flow/voice everything (not saying ur flow or voice is bad) just to try something new. u said u wanted to rap for a living? experiment? cus so far u havent gotten signed or anything (unless ur promotion is just terrible, but i mean demaz said he showed ur shit to cashis? and hell i offered to hand out white noise cd's but u never sent shit [and i never got that autograph! :p])
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby Eedee » Nov 18th, '14, 03:51

That's cause White Noise sucked lmao. I might actually make the CDs though for my next project.
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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby Jaba » Nov 18th, '14, 03:53

Eedee wrote:That's cause White Noise sucked lmao. I might actually make the CDs though for my next project.

kkk

if u want a cover ask me (if u want me to do it).
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
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Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby Eedee » Nov 18th, '14, 03:55

Jaba wrote:
Eedee wrote:That's cause White Noise sucked lmao. I might actually make the CDs though for my next project.

kkk

if u want a cover ask me (if u want me to do it).


Sure, dude. Your covers are pretty dope tbh. I'll skype you
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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby Jaba » Nov 18th, '14, 03:57

Eedee wrote:
Jaba wrote:
Eedee wrote:That's cause White Noise sucked lmao. I might actually make the CDs though for my next project.

kkk

if u want a cover ask me (if u want me to do it).


Sure, dude. Your covers are pretty dope tbh. I'll skype you
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ive gotten better

and tbh their wasnt much i could do with white noise
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
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Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby Eedee » Nov 18th, '14, 03:58

Lol it's all good. Let's just forget about that whole project :D
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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby Jaba » Nov 18th, '14, 03:59

Eedee wrote:Lol it's all good. Let's just forget about that whole project :D

it had some good songs on it. tbh it was just too long. and a lot of the songs sounded the same. but their are some gems on their. imo ur best is daydreams & nightmares :b:
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
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Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby MistaVijilantee » Nov 18th, '14, 11:56

Whew - Eedee on the beat indeed.

Your delivery sounds really confident and you're going in HAM IN DA TRAP.
'I'm Mila Kunis hot, you ugly - Meg Griffin' - this line quite a cocky funny boast - diggity.
Was this a freestyle off the dome or pre written?
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Re: Chips Down (Freestyle)

Postby Eedee » Nov 18th, '14, 14:06

MistaVijilantee wrote:Whew - Eedee on the beat indeed.

Your delivery sounds really confident and you're going in HAM IN DA TRAP.
'I'm Mila Kunis hot, you ugly - Meg Griffin' - this line quite a cocky funny boast - diggity.
Was this a freestyle off the dome or pre written?


Most of it was pre-written (I say freestyle in like a one-off/no hooked song) but some lines were freestyled like the Meg Griffin line :y:
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