LOL yea... I didnt know what to do with the chorus and i was listening to mbdtf and i was like fuck it, lets try to make my voice sound like a chorus off that/rihanna? lol lmao. I say "do not kill me do not kill me please do not kill me! use your strength to pul yourself out of this horrible dark place".TotalEminemFanboy wrote:Man I love to hear fellow people who just rap for the fun of it and do it because they enjoy it.
Your lyrics are aight, and I like how you ride on the beat, it's chill. I can tell you're really enthusiastic and had fun with the song, it really shows.
Your actual rapping is decent, I feel like it can always improve, but hey, not too bad! Your voice is interesting, sounds like you're like in your early teens or so because your voice isn't that deep, and I feel like if your voice was slightly deeper it would add to the flow and sound overall. I did like the bars you dropped though.
The only thing I didn't like was the chorus hahaha it was pretty wack tbh. I have no clue what you're saying and it made me just start laughing out loud xDDDD all in all though, I like your rapping! You should try out some more traditional beats and see what you can pull off.
Keep having fun man, the more you do the better you get.
MUSIC_FEIN wrote:You have good energy and the lyrics arent too bad. Biggest concern is the beat choice for what your talking about just doesnt match it. A proper beat would make the overall concept sound more natural, your lyrics just dont go with your flow and delivery because it sounds forced on that beat. Keep working bro, practice makes perfect.
Btw, I posted a couple of my songs (under PlayWryte) if you want to go check them out and leave feedback.
MUSIC_FEIN wrote:Well I do applaud and respect artists who experiment and go outside their norm.
Jaba wrote:Mezdux wrote:Terrible.
Thanks for the feedback man
Melanie wrote:Mezdux wrote:Melanie wrote:i'm just saying. the album could be recovery 2.
If you're serious, shut up. Everybody said this about MMLP2.
we'll see in 20 days or so.
True Wiz wrote:Most people just don't have a rap voice. That's why most people fail.
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