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Re: Do Not Kill Me

Postby Atone » Nov 19th, '14, 12:27

that, or kinda, east indian ish, like Mamouhd or whatever his name was on here a few years ago, he has that kind of accent
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Re: Do Not Kill Me

Postby Jaba » Nov 20th, '14, 03:42

Atone wrote:you sound like a nerdy kid who stumbled into a recording studio all alone and decided to make a couple songs before somebody found you,

you don't have the voice, or if you do, you just havn't found it yet, you sound way to weird, this is me saying this, one of the most hated rappers on TR, i'[m not saying give up, i'm saying keep going, keep trying, but work on getting better, link up with somebody that knows what they are doing and have them help you

i'm currently taking alot of notes and getting alot of help from Demaz and Eedee, i know i can do better, and so can you

Why take notes from other younger TR rappers? Your 26 lmao... Listen to some of the highly respected rappers and take notes from them.

Thanks for the feedback. And calling me a nerdy kid. Funny, hehe....

And dont take this like im pissed cus i got "bad feedback". I dont give a fuck about feedback good or bad. I take it and try to improve. But really i make what sounds good too me. So dont take this as me "getting mad" or some shit.
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Re: Do Not Kill Me

Postby -AKA- » Nov 20th, '14, 04:00

Sound quality was bad. Lyrics were ehhhh. Delivery is not good.
Gotta have confidence when you get behind the mic. Still young yet tho. So practice
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Re: Do Not Kill Me

Postby mdemaz » Nov 20th, '14, 13:22

found myself actually kinda enjoying this
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Re: Do Not Kill Me

Postby Jaba » Nov 22nd, '14, 02:32

mdemaz wrote:found myself actually kinda enjoying this

:worship:

BTW glad that thatguywihtheglasses avy is back :D

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btw whatd u like about it?
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I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: Do Not Kill Me

Postby SarkingMajor » Nov 25th, '14, 18:31

tbh it wasn't that bad but the hook sounded like Stephen Hawking taking a shit
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I'd work on your delivery a little though. Your flow was amazing in some parts man :y:

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Re: Do Not Kill Me

Postby KingKailez » Nov 26th, '14, 01:53

It's needs a lil work but a decent effort. Keep working on it and your flow will naturally become better. I give it a 3/5
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