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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 17th, '06, 19:24

http://download.yousendit.com/1A0A26D279C2D245
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http://www.sendspace.com/file/mfzr7b

made ti there i think its got a good rythm through just dont know what to add to make it a full beat...

advice ?

edit:

check this one aswell

http://www.sendspace.com/file/2hsyvy


same rythm added more to it though
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 17th, '06, 19:44

http://www.sendspace.com/file/mfzr7b


there :D

imma also upload another version of it i just finished lol
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 17th, '06, 19:47

http://www.sendspace.com/file/2hsyvy

check dis version aswell added more :d
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Postby AspirinE » Dec 17th, '06, 19:58

umm..

this is better than that shit u tried to do before.

a few things i can spot wrong.

1) too simple, this beat is like what 3 layers?

2) the drum patter, a few extra kicks in each, to make it

kick kick .. snare .. kick .. snare .. kick kick ..snare kick ... snare

not kick .. snare... kick .. snare ... kick... kick kick .. snare.

3) fidelity in the beat is absent, u need a tune , a basline (not in all cases though)

4) if u cant really make music (i mean real music) urself, use ur ears, download soul records, orchestra songs ... etc, search for samplable tunes and build over them.

5) download interesting drum samples, effects etc..


Uve nothing to show yet, just takes time and practice, my best advice is- seach for tutorials, try remaking other beats by breaking them down to snares and kicks and reconstrucing them, to gain some suffient experience.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 17th, '06, 20:04

ASP wrote:umm..

this is better than that shit u tried to do before.

a few things i can spot wrong.

1) too simple, this beat is like what 3 layers?

2) the drum patter, a few extra kicks in each, to make it

kick kick .. snare .. kick .. snare .. kick kick ..snare kick ... snare

not kick .. snare... kick .. snare ... kick... kick kick .. snare.

3) fidelity in the beat is absent, u need a tune , a basline (not in all cases though)

4) if u cant really make music (i mean real music) urself, use ur ears, download soul records, orchestra songs ... etc, search for samplable tunes and build over them.

5) download interesting drum samples, effects etc..


Uve nothing to show yet, just takes time and practice, my best advice is- seach for tutorials, try remaking other beats by breaking them down to snares and kicks and reconstrucing them, to gain some suffient experience.


thanx :D big help :worship:

i knwo it still sucks but like you said better than before lol

imma take that stuff into mind :D
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Postby mart85 » Dec 17th, '06, 22:17

yeah, what ASP said is right, I don't really have anything else to suggest lol...
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Postby rhiannon » Dec 19th, '06, 10:42

haha!its kool...i well like it
I LIKE SLIMMY
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