If You Hate Me

[Kez]

Marth made the beat.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/rqlre8

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like i said flow and lyrics on the verses are sick youve done better with choruses before but its still kool, the beat was ok aswell

[$0 R3@L]

verses were pretty tight....the hook was not to good....a one point it totally slips off the beat....who is producing these tracks for you bruv??? they should try takin your acapellas on a hook and using overlay on them...it just makes your hook more noticable from the verse....

Also on your verses experiment with puttin some overlays over a few punchlines (last words in sentence)

this effect is gonna take a bit of time to get perfect but when you do it adds alot to the track.


other then that your flow was good as ever and verses where pretty well structured.If you use my ideas i really reckon u could bang out some classics.

good work.

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verses were pretty tight....the hook was not to good....a one point it totally slips off the beat....who is producing these tracks for you bruv??? they should try takin your acapellas on a hook and using overlay on them...it just makes your hook more noticable from the verse....

Also on your verses experiment with puttin some overlays over a few punchlines (last words in sentence)

this effect is gonna take a bit of time to get perfect but when you do it adds alot to the track.


other then that your flow was good as ever and verses where pretty well structured.If you use my ideas i really reckon u could bang out some classics.

good work.

i think you should explain overlays and everything even put screenshots coz i really wanne learn and quite frankly am shit at mixing thats why i always got to ask favours

[Kez]

Nobody is producing it for me Real, i have to do it myself, that's why my stuff often falls off the beat. Gotta find someone to mix my shit for me and find out how to save sessions and send them etc.

Yeah i'll try with overlays and shit, see if i can find out how on the internet or something.
I think the hook's okay, i have done better yeah.

Thanks for feed both of you.

[B.A.D.]

oohhh... amazing

the sad beat is kool, Loved the flow on this one, the hook is really tight... loved the first verse..

halla if you want me to produce again 4 you