(re-recorded)first single of ma upcoming album(clear voice..

by **randomghost** » Jan 17th, '07, 17:15

I RECORDED THE SONG AGAIN SIT AND CRY WITH A CLEAR ACAPELLA AND CLEAR VOICE SO I HOPE U GUYS ENJOY. HERE IS THE LINK:

http://rapidshare.com/files/12118591/Ra ... _.mp3.html

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by **$0 R3@L** » Jan 17th, '07, 17:24

i swear thats dope :confusion:

good track was a lil random at parts but overall wasa good track.Hook was well done and the verses seemed to match.The beat was maybe not my style but ok.Lyrics seemed pretty decent.Not a bad attempt:

6/10

by **mart85** » Jan 17th, '07, 17:38

yeah, it was nice, you flowed well to the beat... the chorus is cool, although when you sing, you're a little off beat (the last time, you were more on time with the beat though)... but yeah, overall it was cool, the second verse was your best in my opinion

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 17th, '07, 17:44

dont like it :sweating:

i dunno why i just cant connect or enjoy it :sweating:

and i dunno what to do to make it better coz everyone els eliked it probly just my taste

by **randomghost** » Jan 17th, '07, 17:45

thanx for the support..

by **randomghost** » Jan 17th, '07, 19:09

Bar wrote:dont like it i dunno why i just cant connect or enjoy it and i dunno what to do to make it better coz everyone els eliked it probly just my taste

its ok i will have more songs comin

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 17th, '07, 19:11

randomghost wrote:
Bar wrote:dont like it i dunno why i just cant connect or enjoy it and i dunno what to do to make it better coz everyone els eliked it probly just my taste
its ok i will have more songs comin

you need to rap about something, a subject or something eveyrhting always sounds to random

by **randomghost** » Jan 17th, '07, 20:32

Bar wrote:
randomghost wrote:
Bar wrote:dont like it i dunno why i just cant connect or enjoy it and i dunno what to do to make it better coz everyone els eliked it probly just my taste
its ok i will have more songs comin

you need to rap about something, a subject or something eveyrhting always sounds to random

i will do ma best to rap abot some subject next time.

by **C-Game** » Jan 17th, '07, 20:37

i liked it man
but 2 da chorus do some highlights ( lay overs )

coz it seems a lil thin
other thn that its kool
good flow and stuff ( and next time wen u make da cgame version u can make it up to 1 mb ...lol

)

by **$0 R3@L** » Jan 17th, '07, 20:45

yer alot of peeps need to attempt layovers cause your hooks really dont stand out from your verses :unsure:

someone needs to write up a guide me thinks :-k

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 17th, '07, 20:47

$0 R3@L wrote:yer alot of peeps need to attempt layovers cause your hooks really dont stand out from your verses someone needs to write up a guide me thinks

i agree with that :worship:

will you mixing genuises please DO THIS!!!!!

coccoa did one and it helped :happy:

but he never updated

by **C-Game** » Jan 17th, '07, 21:18

Bar wrote:
$0 R3@L wrote:yer alot of peeps need to attempt layovers cause your hooks really dont stand out from your verses someone needs to write up a guide me thinks

i agree with that

will you mixing genuises please DO THIS!!!!!

coccoa did one and it helped but he never updated

ill do it 2mo

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 17th, '07, 21:21

cgame wrote:
Bar wrote:
$0 R3@L wrote:yer alot of peeps need to attempt layovers cause your hooks really dont stand out from your verses someone needs to write up a guide me thinks

i agree with that

will you mixing genuises please DO THIS!!!!!

coccoa did one and it helped but he never updated

ill do it 2mo

i could keep goin but ill ruin the topic :sweating:

cant wait to read it coz i need help big time :whistle:

by **mart85** » Jan 17th, '07, 21:31

well basically to sum it up, you can record 2 or 3 takes of your chorus and put them together, pan one take to the left, one take to the right, and one that you keep on center... this is a simple way to do it if you don't want to go through all the possibilities of effects lol

by **B.A.D.** » Jan 18th, '07, 01:47

^^^^ I do that a lot lol

yo, this was much better lol, thnx 4 using my beat again, looking forward to more productions

(re-recorded)first single of ma upcoming album(clear voice..

(re-recorded)first single of ma upcoming album(clear voice..

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