((NEW NEW NEW))Random Ghost-Tired Of Trying

by **randomghost** » Jan 22nd, '07, 17:02

it will be in ma upcoming album, the song is produced by VTZ, the song name is: tired of trying.

here is the link: http://rapidshare.com/files/12866277/Ra ... _.mp3.html

enjoy :8)

by **B.A.D.** » Jan 22nd, '07, 22:14

You went a looot of beat

The lyrics are great, too deep... Luv that style but i think your flow wasn't good...

Didn't like the hook.... but the song in it is really great... I liked it..

by **randomghost** » Jan 22nd, '07, 22:18

30-3 wrote:You went a looot of beat

The lyrics are great, too deep... Luv that style but i think your flow wasn't good...

Didn't like the hook.... but the song in it is really great... I liked it..

props for that :8)

by **randomghost** » Jan 23rd, '07, 00:48

any other comments? :8)

by **randomghost** » Jan 23rd, '07, 16:59

by **mart85** » Jan 23rd, '07, 17:24

hmm... yeah, sometimes you were getting off-beat, especially in the chorus, you were a bit too fast... and I didn't like the chorus that much, well it was ok but it's just the "I'm TIIIIRED" that I don't like that much lol, no offence... sometimes it was good, but sometimes it was way too much for me lol... like at around 3:13, that's too much for me lol

but the lyrics were good, and the concept is nice, I think if you work on your flow a bit, and try to really stay on time with the beat, and concentrate on your delivery to make sure nothing sounds out of place, it could make a pretty good song... keep it up :8)

by **randomghost** » Jan 23rd, '07, 17:26

mart85 wrote:hmm... yeah, sometimes you were getting off-beat, especially in the chorus, you were a bit too fast... and I didn't like the chorus that much, well it was ok but it's just the "I'm TIIIIRED" that I don't like that much lol, no offence... sometimes it was good, but sometimes it was way too much for me lol... like at around 3:13, that's too much for me lol

but the lyrics were good, and the concept is nice, I think if you work on your flow a bit, and try to really stay on time with the beat, and concentrate on your delivery to make sure nothing sounds out of place, it could make a pretty good song... keep it up

thanx mart for the supportm i really appreciate it :8)

and i wil try too concentrate a lil bit on ma flow. thanx

by **C-Game** » Jan 23rd, '07, 18:40

oki today i got da song
its koooll
if u can make da choruse more uniqe wit some layovers and panning..
and wen ur doin a chorus try to change da key a lil or da flow...

overall its good
but bro still ma fave from u is ARE WE DONE

by **randomghost** » Jan 23rd, '07, 19:17

C-Game wrote:oki today i got da song
its koooll
if u can make da choruse more uniqe wit some layovers and panning..
and wen ur doin a chorus try to change da key a lil or da flow...

overall its good
but bro still ma fave from u is ARE WE DONE

i will re-record are we done again and change verse 2, an make it more clear, i will post it so soon :8)

by **$0 R3@L** » Jan 23rd, '07, 20:49

i pretty much agree with what everyone said,its ok.The 'im tired' gets annoyin after a while and painful to hear.Maybe had you tried approachin it diff and just using th e'im tired' as the hook it would of worked better.

The beat is ok but not vtz best.

It was an ok track but defo not your best stuff man.

5/10

by **MoBrat** » Jan 24th, '07, 00:22

$0 R3@L wrote:i pretty much agree with what everyone said,its ok.The 'im tired' gets annoyin after a while and painful to hear.Maybe had you tried approachin it diff and just using th e'im tired' as the hook it would of worked better.

The beat is ok but not vtz best.

It was an ok track but defo not your best stuff man.

5/10

i agree not horrible but not ur best and i dont know if it's my computer but at like 3:36 the beat kinda skips and sounds sketchy
good track overall tho

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