New Beat practice

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it is as i say, practice, just messing around coz i is bored,

only 13 seconds long so any feed is appreciated

http://www.zshare.net/audio/practice-mp3.html

[Vettori]

If it was a bit slower and had a Nice melodic feel behind it i could work with it well

ut at this point it needs quite the work....

[DC4952]

it aight. if it were mine i would keep the drums more simple, but its cool if u like it like that. u should keep workin with it and add more to it.

[mart85]

yeah that's right, it's not bad but it needs more work in it you should practise with more "normal" drum patterns, or just listen to a song that you like, and try to recreate the drum pattern... it's a good way to learn

[Tomega]

Try to make the melody louder and the drums a lil more on the background..
it's quite fast, but thats just a matter for the type of song its going to be used for..

it is original, but it need some more

keep posting your beats

[$0 R3@L]

didnt like the noises...the beat kick etc samples u used sound pro so dats good.....there wertn really a melody plus the drum didnt match the bass etc....the tempo was slighty to fast for my liking.

Keep at it though ,gotta start somewhere

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thx for the feed i like messing around so ill take what ya'll said into thought

[Phantom]

sounds too fruityloopish

u usin all stock sounds man

www,productionsamples.tk

thatll help a lot

[B.A.D.]

^^^^that page is good haha

To been sinceer (or whateva)... i didn't like the beat at all
too much drums and no flow... but yo

its great for an ol skool shit... nice mayn

keep it uupp