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Postby Call Me Pik » Feb 16th, '07, 19:49

Song about hmmm racism sorta just a situation i went through with this one kid and me catchin the heat for it all no regrets except for the consequences juvi, people getting different impressions of me, and how im looked at in gods eyes

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=162397&songID=4938607

listen to full song and gimme some feedback thnks get at me
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Postby Sleepy » Feb 16th, '07, 19:56

NIce ;)

nice style good lyrics
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 16th, '07, 20:02

nice mixing on the chorus man :worship:

this track is better than the otherone u poasted lyrically, beta is better, verses are sick, i like the concept, dunno bout the content i dunno what somethings are aimed at but i aint hating, real nice track man you got a good style and flow :worship:
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Postby yoshi » Feb 16th, '07, 20:11

wow.. haven't heard that other track, but this one is great. i really liked it! great lyrics, that's the kind of songs i like.. and yeah, your flow is pretty good too. good job :8) lookin forward to hear more from you
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Postby Vettori » Feb 16th, '07, 20:19

Well, I respect what you do, I belive that in a few years maybe sooner yull be so much better...But about the racist thing....lol you say fuck caucasions >.< lol...Your a guy who i listen to his music and think ill give it a listen tho, cause ur not boring...With more work ull be so much better...and i think u can do some good choruses....:D...and qualitys not bad...Keep doin what you do..I only had one problem outta the hole song..But overall good job...check out the serius debate sections... about racism you might take into knoledge and view others views on the situation...Pce :P
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Postby Call Me Pik » Feb 16th, '07, 20:19

thnks ...stay uppin

bar sed "dunno bout the content i dunno what somethings are aimed at "

the third verse prolly duzent make that much sense unless ur me i guess kuz i was writing it in my perspective of the situation so my fault for the confusion
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 16th, '07, 20:22

i loved it.We should collab someday man....check audio section for some of my tracks :worship: ,Track was dope hook was amazing :worship:
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Postby Call Me Pik » Feb 16th, '07, 20:23

thnks fah the feed an props i'll check tha sect. out
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Postby C-Game » Feb 16th, '07, 20:25

lookin at da feed i assume this is a good song..
if u can upload a wma version i wld be glad to check it out...
da whole TR forum knows abt ma "fast" net
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 16th, '07, 20:26

Call Me Pik wrote:thnks ...stay uppin

bar sed "dunno bout the content i dunno what somethings are aimed at "

the third verse prolly duzent make that much sense unless ur me i guess kuz i was writing it in my perspective of the situation so my fault for the confusion


lol that and the fact i aint from america and you are saying some views i dont udnerstand lol
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Postby Call Me Pik » Feb 16th, '07, 20:28

oh shit that too hahahha
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Postby Vettori » Feb 16th, '07, 20:30

Go chek out my verses and see what you think....There located like 2 or 3 threads down from urs...see what yu think and leave feed plz thx
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Postby Call Me Pik » Feb 16th, '07, 20:40

aight faith i got u

c game i dont know how to make a wma file or w/e im not that computer savii
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Postby C-Game » Feb 16th, '07, 20:52

Call Me Pik wrote:aight faith i got u

c game i dont know how to make a wma file or w/e im not that computer savii


oh
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can sum1 do it
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 16th, '07, 20:54

C-Game wrote:
Call Me Pik wrote:aight faith i got u

c game i dont know how to make a wma file or w/e im not that computer savii


oh
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can sum1 do it


go to his soundclick and listen on lo-fi , thats low qlty :sweating:
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