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ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

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ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby ThomasAguanis » Dec 24th, '07, 17:33

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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby Enimee » Dec 24th, '07, 18:14

HOLY..SHYT..that.. was.. HARD

i really felt u on this track ta i mean the emotion was overwhelmin the beat was sick as always and it was just altogether to nice

mc did great with the mixxin

only complaint is that bar was a lil off point sometimes where flow is concerened but not bad enuff to care really that track was beyond all expectations that was jus plain sick please keep doin this kinda shyt here cuz its fuckin lovely
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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby DelinQuent » Dec 24th, '07, 19:24

hott.
bad things, TA you're voice doesn't sound real, sounds like you were trying to be high pitched. maybe if you used a lowe tone of voice? either way it was crazy cause you had good lyrics.
Bar, yeah seemed off a little bit, but you had some nice multies thrown it so it made up for it lol.
chorus, hot lyrics, the voice thing has me thrown off tho, definately a lower tone of voice or more emotion thrown it would do it 10x better.
good job to both of you 8/10
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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 24th, '07, 21:02

sick stuff by you on this tom, you know what i think of this


btw people, this was recorded ages ago lol
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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 24th, '07, 21:20

beat could be louder, its hot

thomas.. damn I'm really feelin that... the lyrics are deep hot, damn... I feel ya

the God almighty line is sick

the hook is DEEEEEPPPP, loved that right there,

on thomas only if you put the beat louder along with the pella, thats all

Bar strong lines, the lyrics and wordplay is great, the flow is ok, not perfect but good enough to enjoy, killer verse, and sick for this typa track

third verse by thomas is good, not like the first one, but still masterpiece

for being an old track sounds CRazy, loved it.... nice job on the mixing

only things need to be fixed is the volumes play, but other than that is sick... bar's flow, its ok but prolly was a problem with the mixing so its cool,

good job :y: :y:
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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby IceAxe » Dec 24th, '07, 21:54

I'm pretty much on the same page as everyone else, this is some great work. The only criticisms i can think of is the volume of the beat could be a bit louder, and Bar's flow was off some places, but not enough to throw off the verse. And it's 12 MB :unsure:
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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby Kez » Dec 24th, '07, 22:21

**Awaits the Christians to come in waving their crosses**

Another sick TA track :y:

Beat's pretty good. Hook is alright, a very good question, although Christians will argue that God did let us do what we want by giving us free will. But that's just a technicality. Verses from you TA have real great lyrics and meaning, i don't understand people who say your use of multis makes it a multi-fest that makes no sense. Great concept and lyrics, your delivery and flow are on-point as always. Well-produced, with the difference between verses and hook. I agree about Bar's verse being slightly off-flow, but forgetting that, good lyrics. Again, decent delivery; dosen't sound quieter than TA to me, which is a good thing, because on SA's track he featured on this was an issue. So yeah, good verse from Bar.

I can't wait for your tape TA, gonna be good :y:
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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby Speech » Dec 25th, '07, 00:31

this was real deep and real real(lol)

i respect that song 100% fuck it..i respect it 1000%...becuz that kinda track wouldn be easy for me to have a colab on, specially if my partner *no homo* lives like far faaaaar away haha...this shit connected very well tho..nice job...nothing to complain on the lyrics all great....quality is another thing buddy....mc maybe mixed this? hmm....well i didn like the effect on the hook too much, not a fan of that...what i like is the change in last few lines before the chorus starts, that was cool...
plus bar bein nice too, with that i mean he didn mess it up, he kept it real and listenable...maybe off at one or two pints but uhm idk i didn care for that...of course a track like that must be flawless but fuck it this time, lyrics got it all

hmm...i give this 8.9 / 10...mixing could be better, but no big thing :y:
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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby Mc Cubz » Dec 25th, '07, 08:14

lol i herd this before its hot man its sum hot shit, fuuuuuck how clear did maybe get ur vocals fuk have u got a new mic or still the same one as me, if u have either i got a shit one or the amount of times i dropped it on the floor from 5feet has affected it lol! mixing it stupendous (sick as fuk (excellent))

the track is good - btw i just want to make sure, cos alot of the time it isnt, in toms 2nd verse (the 3rd verse) is the deepest verse to come out of this tr site man! I shouldnt have to explain cos the lyrics and execution of them is very clear if you listen, but its about ur sister init i knw tht cos u have told me about her seperate to the song! Thts sum deep honest shit that rap misses so much of the time

ok tom and bar as always wid ne of us we can always improve our execution in terms of voice projction/emphasis, the thing is were youthfull rappers that arent signed to a major label so its still ok!

bar - wen u let ur natural accent come through more thats, for me aleast, when you will become the good rapper your lyrics want you to be! as a mate I would enourage u to rap full on-scottish accent if necessary cos i onli know one rapper that does so and hes got quite big on the uk hiphop scene and considering how many ppl rap in the uk its quite commendable, but it will be easier for you to sound good that way. i fink u knw who that rapper is he does well in the jump off battles, but more over i remember u put a request for someone to get his song from his myspace - hopefully tht shud jog ur memory as to who i mean,

in conclusion nice song man it will add to ur mixtape tom - a hard song to do, them slow beats reali drag out any rappers voice and make u have to work hard to sound good!
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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 25th, '07, 11:54

yea great great great lyrics...by both :worship: and like speech said...didnt like the effect on the hook...but its allryt and the effect at the end of each verse was dope :y: hmmm my thought were already said...vocals and beat volume couldbe raised a lil bit....lyrics stand out big time :y: :y: nice one
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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby Block » Dec 26th, '07, 00:10

Not bad man..
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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby Jay-19 » Dec 26th, '07, 16:18

Fucking crazy! This is one great damn song! Lyrics are off the hook, and the hook is just.. wow! Bar lays down a great verse too! Overall one of the greatest tracks I've downloaded from TRShady. :y:
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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby mart85 » Dec 27th, '07, 18:16

nice deep track guys... everything I thought has been said so far, but yeah real nice lyrics from TA... and Bar, you were slightly off at parts but you said it was recorded ages ago, and the lyrics were great so no worries lol :y:

keep it up guys :y:
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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby Mc Cubz » Dec 31st, '07, 22:37

tom this was one from that group of tracks uve dun in the last few months thts been lyrically and sound-quality-wise pretty good, keep doing this, make that tape, wen ur more than 16/17 ur guna b so good man, jus need to keep on it, keep that unique rhyming style aswell cos i nt reli herd it of other rappers! :worship:
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Re: ThomasAguanis- God, Why? (Ft. Bar)

Postby bg_pop » Jan 10th, '08, 19:51

The beat is great :worship:
thomas great lyrics and flow but the sound of the chorus is not my type but it's good too :8)
BAR great :whistle: I am waiting for your part :) I give you my support
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