New Shit...Long Time No Track..."Face Fears Undone"

[Speech]

ish ya boy P...spizzy

i didn drop shit in a whole fuckin while..and uhm just wanted to see what you ppl think here is the deal:
i got a mixtape planed...called Who Got Game...nothing but that real talk on this lil piece of work...it is a mixtape so there is full trax on there and a coupla sixteens and such...concepts to the tape is realness...the indie side of hip hop and blah blah.....some personal shit..you know
so the track i hope you to listen to is yet called Face Fears, the track is undone tho so it will be renamed after i edited the track(intro and shouting in the main chorus needs to be on there too)
some ppl here may remember me...my artist name used to be Speech....but i did a lil research and i found out there is this rhymer of the group Arrested Development , called Speech already..so fuck it i renamed my ass into spizzy aka Lavelle P....i just wanted to know if some of the ppl on TR that remember me, could tell me if i improved(as fas as they remember my old shit) or if they think that my shit got worse haha
oh well i'm off to work in 5 min. so i'ma just hand you ppl the link and take off
peace your boy spizzy


track is about personal problems, but not too deep so dont expect some shit that make you cry (lol)
http://www.zshare.net/audio/69840857acad21/

EDIT: Track Is Produced By SINIMA BEATS...sorry forgot that haha

[Xray]

HOLY SHIETTT!!

first of all im gonna be listening to this for a month or so.. so let me break it down
Beat: hits straight into my soul and brain meaning i love it
Intro & Outro: Absolutely AWESOME!! & Catchy as fuck
verse 1: energy & flow straight fucken lava, lyrics straight murder
verse 2: exact the same with verse 1 im feeling both verses very much
Chorus: matches the song like Erik B and Rakim
Mixing: WHERE THE FUCK YOU LEARNED TO MAKE YOUR ACA's LIKE THAT!!!!!!

i think enuff said

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

oh spizzzzzzy
yea man 1st u still love ur mixing delievery is FUCKEN GREAT man...deep lyrics..hella good rhymes
rappin is damn clear great job...well delievery could be a but more emotional (no offense) since its a deep track...but ayo again...great mixing skillz

9.9/10

btw *downloads*

[dbeauluvswomen]

I agree with everything Sajjad said. Beat is nice, good lyrics..vocals are clean. I'm a throw a 10 up on that bitch. Ha and that intro is a bit catchy I like it good work

[Speech]

aaaaaah cool shit..this got some better feedback than i expected...damn
aaite then... i gotta thank everybody for listening so far (double thanking chris for downloading it haha)

and yeah...i think i should have 'exploded' a lil more but i don wanna rape my mic lol....so thank you ppl again
@ maybe: cool shit haha
@chris: you already know what it is
@sajjad : cool thanx man...you the first person i showed this track to thx for checking it out again
@ everybody else who didn feeded yet : please take a lil time (4:05 min) to listen to the track haha

peace

[Wonderbread]

That is fire right there. That hook it tight! Lyrics are nice, tells a story. Nice hit.

[Vettori]

haha my man.....good job i like this one here....small mistakes but for sure not even worth pointing out..u covoured it well, Definatly a big improvements since ur last few songs...... i was workin on that beat to....but ill let u have the light for this haha :P Over all 8.9/10 real good

[Nu Syd]

godam, crazy shit here, i would say more but its already been said

[E&M]

I like your shit

[Speech]

yeah more feedback thx

@E&M : thanx for checkin
@Nu Syd : cool cool thx for checkin also
@ WOnderbread : ..hmmm....thx to you too haha
@ vettori : thx buddy ... would you mind telling me the mistakes in a private message? i really wanna know how i can improve..i need that info so bad lol...ah fuck it i'ma holla at you wait ...oh and thx for giving me "the light"..but drop yours too if you want to..i'd like to see what you got *won't tell that hes scared of vett to realease his hot version* lol

peace

[DelinQuent]

first track i've ever heard from you.
i thought about usin this beat, guess not lol.
lyrics are hot, delivery is crazy. it was easy to connect with you on thsi track and come to your level. great track 9.5/10

[Speech]

first track i've ever heard from you.
i thought about usin this beat, guess not lol.
lyrics are hot, delivery is crazy. it was easy to connect with you on thsi track and come to your level. great track 9.5/10

thx for checkin it out man and thx on the rating...btw use the beat..nobody gives a shit same as i told vett..i didn buy it...free download..use it do your best man

[B.A.D.]

YO SPIZZY!!!!!
where u learn to mix like that, quality is superior!!!

I gotta say I loved this track, I can't find anything bad about this track, its simply a masterpiece

words sound clear, topic is interesting, hook is hot, intro/outro amazing
this is the best track on trshady 2008 so far along with "Breathe" lol

but something amazing, here... everybody download this

yo spizz, you gotta show em the "The Game" track, that one's a piece of art

EVERYONE ON TR!!!! Spizzy has a couple hot verses on The Golden Age so get prepared!!

RAID TIME INC, URD..... we destroying!!!!

amazing track man

[randomghost]

nice track....long time ha....good lyrics....great beat..ncie flow.....RTI 4 life

[SajN]

Like everyone else said:

Really great flow, decent lyrics.
The mixing is good, and you had a really good delivery

Keep It Up