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Bar - I'm Dissing - F'd up, new link soon-

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 12th, '08, 15:02

did this today (was bored) the lyrics werent written for this beat...the lyrics werent written for any beat i wrote them couple of weeks ago in college when i was bored, the chorus was wrote for this beat though (obv.)

bad quality, mixing ect.
not the best flow by me
not my best lyrics
not my proudest moment (lol)
funny little concept if you click on to it though
short track


just couldnt be bothered puting it with my 200 other unreleased track so decided to post it :y:

n since i aint released anything in a while, this proves im not dead and i still have a voice :D


also, little update, i am working on 3 projects (with proper tracks, proper mixing, alot of effort ect.) and hopefully they will all be out this year once i get recording time and shit, witch will most likely be May, right now im just writing practicing ect. so if i got all the stuff for the projects done by march i can get into recording and mixing then :happy:


I am Not dead :smoking:



-Edit-
Link will be fixed in a second, i uploaded the wrong version, the quality was bad but not this bad lol i uploaded the rough mix :sweating:
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Re: Bar - I'm Dissing

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 12th, '08, 15:29

quality was weird...true man :unsure:
lyrics are fine....but u can do better...
hmm...sounded like a freestyle type of track
i wont point everything out becuz as u said ...its wasnt ur best...and i know that
keep it up :y: good to hear somthin from you again :y:
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Re: Bar - I'm Dissing

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Feb 12th, '08, 18:10

It sounds a lot different than other stuff I heard from you. I was listening to your Soundclick page the other day. This track seemed more fast paced which made it harder for me to understand. At first it sounded like you were speaking another language. (Because of the accent) I have to get used to it. I'm going to listen to it a few more times. Nice flow though. Wasn't feeling the beat much.
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Re: Bar - I'm Dissing

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 12th, '08, 19:16

ah shit, i uploaded the wrong version :sweating:


thx on the feed :y:


n gimme a minute to fix this lol
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Re: Bar - I'm Dissing

Postby Kez » Feb 12th, '08, 19:28

Listened to it

Beat's decent
Quality like you said is bad-ish, kinda distracting at times
Your flow and delivery is great on this :y: perfectly suits the track
Lyrics are okay, well suited to this type of track

Overall: Not bad, but i'm not judging you on this as usual, since it's not a full proper track from you and it's not using your full effort.

Probably about 8/10 for me :y:
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Re: Bar - I'm Dissing

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 12th, '08, 21:00

Kez wrote:Listened to it

Beat's decent
Quality like you said is bad-ish, kinda distracting at times
Your flow and delivery is great on this :y: perfectly suits the track
Lyrics are okay, well suited to this type of track

Overall: Not bad, but i'm not judging you on this as usual, since it's not a full proper track from you and it's not using your full effort.

Probably about 8/10 for me :y:



thanx man


and i gott mix this again coz i dunno what i did i think i uploaded the rough mix thinking it was final and deleted the final mix thinking it was the rough one. meh gimme till later on tonight n ill do it, aint in a mixing mood lol
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Re: Bar - I'm Dissing - F'd up, new link soon-

Postby B.A.D. » Feb 12th, '08, 22:53

let me know when u do

and people BAR IS BACK with 2 amazing verses on THE GOLDEN AGE... dropping feb 25
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Re: Bar - I'm Dissing - F'd up, new link soon-

Postby randomghost » Feb 13th, '08, 06:20

30-3 wrote:let me know when u do
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