MY FAULT ! (with Lyrics) Vettori

[Vettori]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/751055431b2b5e/

The volumes low on the vocals but its still understandable

Leave feed tell me what yu think...Ima be droppin my new song when its done mixing...probably tommorow

(Lyrics)

Cause....Its my disguise if i Try to Re hide it,
and keep it away from the Light
Its my fault i promise Ill clean it
Im On it I'm callin the shots Of my lifee
its my liiife


Backround of verses (its my fault)

I stood up and chanced it, my first preformance wow
Safe to say i was hated by the hole damn crowd
so impelled Go without i tryed hard to rebel
a great preformance but no sense ur the odd man out
Like his chest gettin bigger just like his best writtens
Like the plot in a story sticks out,like his next victim
Wheres Nef Vetts with him rappin better lets get em
try to be more predictable bitch you cant rid em
this isnt what ive come to witness. or is it ?
The main exzibit against ill be awake in a minute
to clean plates unfinish, my shade frames sorta tinted
never played or intended, to give away never meant it
Now im holdin harder, No takin shit from me
Ill leave you long enough just to make u wish you was me
whistlin freely why Waist it on Fuck letters
ill put the drink in front of ya face and make it taste much better

Im like a language, hard to understand at first.
I was Born a boy decoy not a Man at birth
Unlike concrete I was soft and grew outta dirt
It came natural, Facinations that wowed My work
Down to earth aint no Strings around my shirt
I take full control holdin these sounds and words
That come outta my mouth, Not knowin How Crowds get hurt
Sounds bizzerk, reachin im not aloud to Jerk
People around, Cause musics a vow, a powerful plow
Take it to far, and your bound to be Pushin a crowd
Face of a star sets em off, stay speaking in Facts
cause whatever yu say People may Cheat you with that
Its a game of pose or be posed, copy his clothes?
or go with a style that Go's with one of your own
Proned to invoke a style like Bitin a rhyme
Ill never do it but i could see people tryna bite mine


Only way to watch it slow-mo is put it in snow,
slow down the process Lettin go the facets are cold
bumps in the road on purpose as my dream re-arose
Lead me a show, or let me lead it, either you leave me or go
leave me alone, the lead Sheep Im a take em all home
I steal the stage i dont need problems for shit that i stole
a role played by a Guy Rated a 5 for a gold
nominated then televized all the lies that he wrote
Quote after quote from his mind Not knowin why he was broke
Even with bribes How hard he tried no buyin there votes
So tired needs to retire His lead is the worst
Fired up to Find what it takes Please just rehearse
Hes always Freakin so he needs them to be peaceful
There people who try to help, You increase No one as equal
My main concern is rappin a belt around my mic
Felt So i can keep the Music up, Sounds just right

[Xray]

the scratches in the intro ruined the intro
verse 1 and 2 good lyrics and delivery
the chorus sounds like it was rushed..didnt like it
the beat is very nice

overall song is good except the scratching in the intro and chorus keep at it man

[Vettori]

Thanks alot man, and the scratching was involved with the beat..i think it sounded good. But sall good...Thanks for the feed...Ill try harder next time

[DelinQuent]

i actually liked the intro. i liked the scratching...
1st verse good flow, lyrics are solid.
chrous, i like the lyrics but i don't like the voice you used.
2nd verse- again great flow, and solid lyrics.
3rd verse- i don't wanna sound repetitive but again a solid flow and good lyrics.
my only complaint is, to me, it sounds nearly emotionless. so the delivery is the only thing that turned me off and for that it's gonna be a 7/10. with more emotion it's easily a 9-10/10

[Vettori]

Thanks alot, i appreciate it, its hard to focus on Emotion when your goin at a fast pace. I find it to be a challenge to me...and the chorus seems to fall of pitch sometimes...But i did sorta rush this song..
anyways again thanks for the feed...I got another track on the way

In rehersal i did the chorus better..But i layered it three times and one of the times i did it differant, so thats why the pitch fell..

[Speech]

The beat made it hard for me to to understand evry single word your spitting, so i had to go back and re-listen to some parts, hard anthem-sounding-like beats ain never been my fav. but, you did well
for the singin...i was impressed sounded more than good, nice
the intro..idk...the scratching was too..uhm how to say..lol non-hip hop-ish lol..had no sound i'd go crazy over (and usually i love the scratchings)...but if it came with the beat, it's not you fault.
the lyrics are great, performance was ok too..i don see too much lack in emotion-showing, i think ppl on tr just over-do it with emotion requests...i mean your a rapper not an actor, with me the delivery was all ok

only thing that bothered me was the beat

great job

9 / 10

p.s. fuck the beat

[Vettori]

appreciated man I myself didnt mind the chorus lol but then again it was my song..I guess just not for some people..I didnt expect ppl to not like the beat tho, i thought it was differant...
and yea i agree with the hole emotion request lol...Last thing i really wanna do is force emotion...i just feel like however it comes out is its natural way...but as i said earlier it is harder to captivate perfect emotion for a track when its spit 25 % faster than all my other ones..Was a new thing for me

Ill post the lyrics up soon cause i know the volumes slightly dimmed

But Thanks alot man Hope overall you enjoyed it

"ps:" i have a new song in the works of being mixed, that should be done tonight...so ill post it.
The concept "i think alot of people who get stereo typed will like this"
Its more based on specifics and my issue, but the ideas there....So what is it to date "livin to die" my best track lol ?

[Kez]

Loving the beat
Intro's alright, does its job
Your vocals are a tad low, it only needs upping a tiny bit
But damn the verses are fire, lyrics, flow and delivery are all hot !
And damn, i absolutely loved the hook
10/10 i can't find anything to fault
You just keep impressing

[Vettori]

Apprciated man, and i didnt have time to comment on the urd drop...U covored ur peice on that as well ...But thanks alot man goes appreciated. This is the sorta song i guess some ppl will like and some wont haha...Its on a scale

But ye thanks to thosee who left feed Helps me get better i have to say alot of my improvement is due to all Youse

[Jay-19]

I love the whole song!

The lyrics are good, the beat is awesome, the chorus is actually the one part I like the most. I love those kind of hooks! And i can't really "complain" about the delivery, like someone else did, It hink it's really good! So yeah, really dope track (again)! Keep this up man!

[Vettori]

Thanks alot man i appreciate it

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

delievery is dope...and ur singin works on
lyrcis are sick again..no complains.. heard better tracks by vettori tho

[Vettori]

Thanks man ......Btw Alot of you guys Compair it to my other stuff lol, i feel like thats how you judge it.....Just seems wierd to me, maybe when you listen to it, forget what ive created in the past...Cause certain beats will take over...Like for intentions of rap thats a hard beat to beat lol...Livin to die got lucky... But all in all i do respect the feed..Keep it commin

[Tash8]

PLEASE BUMP OR FEED CHUMPS!!!

[Vettori]

haha Thx to every one who left feed .