sorry bout the last post heres a better song

[<Stiiccy>]

its called without you....its a preety good song for valitines day lol http://www.megaupload.com/?d=FCWRTSMH

[Tash8]

upload to zshare from now on.

cool beat...

horrible flow, you either gotta be skilled to rap that fast, or you should just get a faster beat..
delievery is ok,, lyrics are pretty bad... i only heard like 10 rhymes overall? you got the emotion, you need to mix it better

overall you need to improve

PS FEED OTHERS !!!

[<Stiiccy>]

thanks for the feedback man ....ive been tryin to get my shit together...its kinda weird i dont want to sound like a dick but on myspace im always gettin love from fans and shit but at trshady you guys think i have horible flow idk new shit comin though

[Tash8]

everyone has suck ups....i'm telling you straight, but you know maybe someone has a different opinion

keep working.

[Vettori]

Here on Tr Yur getting feed from other rappers...People who know and can catch the problems and errors. Other people don't want to hurt ur feelings, its the same for me, i rather come here for feed. Its what helped me get better. and ask anyone on here if i know what im doing at this point, and to be honest i have most of them to thank.

I agree with tash on this one...

Keep at it tho

[Xray]

first of all if you ever wanna spit to a beat like this please make sure you get your emotions straightened out cause atm ur screaming and shouting and ur flow and emotion is out of place..you need to use the layed back flow on these type of beats. and your fast spitting indeed is a problem you need to imagine as if your in a swimming pool or a beach you flow with the water to swim right? so you have to flow smoothly with the beat in order to swim on the track (flow on the track). the way you master your acapellas is way too basic you need some fresh new effects if you want a song to be good..and please upload on zshare, myspace or soundclick

[<Stiiccy>]

well did you guys like it all??

[Tash8]

^ i liked ur emotion... which is a good start.. keep working man, dont take offense to this.

[Xray]

well its not badd but like i said work on them things and you'll find that critism makes a rapper stronger not weaker

[<Stiiccy>]

ahh man im not i just really want to be a rapper for the rest of my life...cuzz thats all i do ,,i eat sleep and breath rap music man

[Xray]

ahh man im not i just really want to be a rapper for the rest of my life...cuzz thats all i do ,,i eat sleep and breath rap music man

yea sames here. if not first be a rapper than make professional beats and take dre's job

[<Stiiccy>]

yeah i lucky enough to co own a label ...and i think staying on an independent level is a whole lot smarter than doing thing on a corprate level...if im doin somthin i dont want some asshole that doesnt know anything about rap to come talk shit to me lol

[Xray]

yeah i lucky enough to co own a label ...and i think staying on an independent level is a whole lot smarter than doing thing on a corprate level...if im doin somthin i dont want some asshole that doesnt know anything about rap to come talk shit to me lol

yea i see its also more freedom like that which is a relief. other than having assholes knocking your door every 5 seconds

[<Stiiccy>]

Yeah you can just imagine about how much shit em,,dre and 50 take every time they release an album

[Xray]

yea damnz must be some stressfull shit but except for 50 cent he can take all the punishment he deserves every stressfull moment he has hope he dies