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[UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby Kez » Mar 29th, '08, 04:14

Well, as you may or may not know, when i make albums, i keep the unedited versions online, but to release it around my area i obviously must make some adjustments. Due to this, this track might not make quite as much sense as it will to the ones it's aimed at.

This is a track i created as (what i thought was) a fitting end to the album; to kind of sum up everything in it.

Listen to "(This Is) The End" here!


If you like it, you're still welcome to download the edited, final cut of Universal from my MySpace! The link is in the description on my About Me section. If you get it and feed me back i'd be incredibly grateful!

I'm just posting this to keep a bit active in the Audio Stage; i haven't posted anything kind of solo for a while (since Razorblade Salvation).
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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 29th, '08, 05:57

hmm idk what to say...i loved your flow...but it takes a second to get used to your accent,, but i like your voice...i love the chorus..but it sounds like some evil ass shit lol not that its bad or nothin its just crazy how it sounds....
over all i give it a 7/10
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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby Tash8 » Mar 29th, '08, 07:29

kez, u need to keep it up man, ur really growing man, i think the first track i heard from you is like a year ago and u've matured as a rapper so much now..

ur climbing the best of rappers REALLY fast...

keep it up...

i like the chorus, flow, lyrics, verses, everything

great song.
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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby Speech » Mar 29th, '08, 13:00

i know why ppl say they love the chorus...forst i thought "stop suckin dick"...but when i heard it i was like "damn this really IS great"....nice job....tash is right your getting really big with this....lyrics...cool....flow fits the beat and the lyrics (has to haha) .....but damn yeah this is great..and the quality..fuckin nice..i loved it....sounded all perfect to me..can't find any flaws...
some nice kez shit man :y:

10 / 10
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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby Kez » Mar 29th, '08, 15:31

Chet wrote:why do you edit your songs for your area....so you can play it in the car with your parents

I'm checking the song now :smoking:


No cause my area is full of chavs

If they hear anything they could percieve as offensive they take it as so :laughing:

And i don't edit the actual songs, i mean i remove some songs if need be

And thanks to Speech, Tash and Sticcy :worship:
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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 29th, '08, 15:50

beat choice is really good man
quality due verses is good too...could be better but i got used to ur quality :p
lyrics are excellent :worship: flow perfect
quality in the hook fucks up..lol...and ur singing aint THE BEST :) but its okay tho
decent track... :y:
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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby Kez » Mar 29th, '08, 15:57

Chet wrote:what are chavs :unsure:


A chav is a UK term.

It's probably what you would describe as a wannabe gangsta; you know, the kind who hang around on the streets getting drunk and startin shit with random people?
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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby Kez » Mar 29th, '08, 16:06

Killa wrote:kez if possible id really appreciate if ya could pm me links of the last 2 or 3 tapes ya did (tryna do abit of feed catch up for the people who deserve it)


Thanks Killa, very appreciated :y:
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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby Xray » Mar 29th, '08, 17:24

bro your quality is dope man..you been using my method?...concept is TOP!..energy was really enjoyable..and for all those that say you've improved they haven't seen shit yet...its good to see your voice has matured and now your music is...so all you need to do is...KEEP THAT SHIT UP!!!!!!...and chorus was nice...just needed an effect on it...maybe a delay effects-chorus and mess around wid the stuff in chorus..and it might sound better :y:

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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby Kez » Mar 29th, '08, 19:09

Xray wrote:bro your quality is dope man..you been using my method?...concept is TOP!..energy was really enjoyable..and for all those that say you've improved they haven't seen shit yet...its good to see your voice has matured and now your music is...so all you need to do is...KEEP THAT SHIT UP!!!!!!...and chorus was nice...just needed an effect on it...maybe a delay effects-chorus and mess around wid the stuff in chorus..and it might sound better :y:

overall = crazy


Yep, been using your method :y: :y:

And thanks :worship:
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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 29th, '08, 21:44

you already showed this to me

hot hot sick track

bumpin this

UNIVERSAL 2 coming soon!!!!!
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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 12th, '08, 02:29

your flow is struggling at parts on this but when it isnt strugling its really good.

lyrics were really sick some great rhymes, concept was smart but its the way you did it that was great again really mature and shows you progression as an artists.

great song man, n sorry bout the late feed lol
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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby mart85 » Apr 15th, '08, 18:24

your quality sounds better than usual :y: you have good flow and lyrics, you're improving well since your first tracks man :y: I thought the chorus could use some effects in the mixing like xray said, but other than that it was nice, keep it up man
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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby Kez » Apr 15th, '08, 18:36

Thanks @ Bar & Mart :worship:
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Re: [UNRELEASED] (This Is) The End!!

Postby Darkblade44431 » Apr 19th, '08, 14:23

i listened to the first link, the one that wasnt on myspace. i dont like it. it seems like ur trying to copy eminem and also ur not even selling albums so why r u talking about the day that you quit? lol, i just think thats funny. i dont like the way it sounds because your accent fucks up the whole song. and it doesnt sound gangster at all. i dont like it...
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