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New Single!! Psychopath

Postby Xray » Apr 10th, '08, 06:49

Title: Psychopath
Artist: Sajjad
Album: The Dark Days Saga: Volume 1 EP
Produced By: Tash8
Mixed By: Sajjad/Tash8

Tash8 and I (Sajjad) worked really hard on this track. It was meant to be a song to compete with Mc Maybe & Bar, because they too are maybe/maybe not using this beat. But since it turned out really good, both Tash8 and I decided to make it a single for The Dark Days Saga: Volume 1 EP. So we both hope you enjoy this song, as we did.

Link: http://www.zshare.net/audio/10309416e09e7ae0/

Enjoy and leave what ever type feedback you think is necessary. Thanks :y:
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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby shady6 » Apr 10th, '08, 06:57

i thought it was an all round good trak :y:

you flowed near perfect at times with the beat (which was tight by the way)

the rhymes were good, and hat hook was really catchy :happy:

keep up tha good work, lookin forward to the EP :flower:

PS: I dunno much about it, but I'm guessin you and tash squashed the lil beef you had?
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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby Tash8 » Apr 10th, '08, 07:01

shady6 wrote:PS: I dunno much about it, but I'm guessin you and tash squashed the lil beef you


The whole thing was a joke, it was to build hype for song

PS can people feed beat too
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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby Xray » Apr 10th, '08, 07:03

shady6 wrote:i thought it was an all round good trak :y:

you flowed near perfect at times with the beat (which was tight by the way)

the rhymes were good, and hat hook was really catchy :happy:

keep up tha good work, lookin forward to the EP :flower:

PS: I dunno much about it, but I'm guessin you and tash squashed the lil beef you had?

thanks homie, glad you enjoyed it :worship:

like tash said lol :whistle:

thanks for that beat tash fucken genious man :worship:
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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby shady6 » Apr 10th, '08, 07:04

Tash8 wrote:
shady6 wrote:PS: I dunno much about it, but I'm guessin you and tash squashed the lil beef you


The whole thing was a joke, it was to build hype for song

PS can people feed beat too


ah lol. as i said, i hadn't a single clue about it, just saw it mentioned in another thread :sweating:

anyways, ya, the beat was sik!

i was talkin to sajjad on msn while listenin to it, and the first thing that ame to mind in he beginning was that the bat was dope :happy:

and it matched his flow awesomely

shady6 wrote:i thought it was an all round good trak :y:

you flowed near perfect at times with the beat (which was tight by the way)

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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby Hadez » Apr 10th, '08, 07:18

nice track man, i liked it. don't really know wut else to say.
but around 1:15-1:16, the way you squeezed "education" kinda sounded a little sloppy. other than that it's great.

beat was nice. wasn't at all repetitive or anything like that. plus i like pianos :happy:
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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby Xray » Apr 10th, '08, 07:24

Hadez wrote:nice track man, i liked it. don't really know wut else to say.
but around 1:15-1:16, the way you squeezed "education" kinda sounded a little sloppy. other than that it's great.

beat was nice. wasn't at all repetitive or anything like that. plus i like pianos :happy:

Hmm i see, thanks for pointing that out :y: and thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it :worship:
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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby Hadez » Apr 10th, '08, 07:30

Chet wrote:Tash you did a great job on the beat, it's awesome

Sajjad your rhymes were awesome, flowed great to the beat

But I didn't like the song, The beat to me is for a happy song, a starting over song and raising up....and Sajjad is talking about the devil.

But You both did great jobs tho, so :y:

actually happier/upbeat beats mixed with a negative topic is a good way to get people who don't like depressing songs to listen. cuz despite the lyrics the person may not end up feelin down and sad if the beat is more positive.
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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby Xray » Apr 10th, '08, 07:35

Hadez wrote:
Chet wrote:Tash you did a great job on the beat, it's awesome

Sajjad your rhymes were awesome, flowed great to the beat

But I didn't like the song, The beat to me is for a happy song, a starting over song and raising up....and Sajjad is talking about the devil.

But You both did great jobs tho, so :y:

actually happier/upbeat beats mixed with a negative topic is a good way to get people who don't like depressing songs to listen. cuz despite the lyrics the person may not end up feelin down and sad if the beat is more positive.

word :y: and thanks chet for checking it out :worship: even though u didn't like it :p
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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby Hadez » Apr 10th, '08, 08:34

if you could feed the beat i posted in the studio section it'd be greatly appreciated :y:
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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 10th, '08, 11:35

didnt like it, noise that comes in on the chorus (bass or organ or something) was disgustingly cheesy, the beat itself is good but it just doesnt sound good with the vocals.

mc wise its good, chorus was a nice but didnt work with the beat imo, rhyming was nice, best thing was the flow.


dunno just dont like this track :sweating:
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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby Kez » Apr 10th, '08, 12:12

Nice tactic with the beef thing, you got me haha

Alright. Tash, amazing beat.
Hook is just amazing
On the verses: delivery works perfect, kinda calm thing
Lyrics nice
Flow's amazin
I agree about the education part, but apart from that it's really just amazin :worship: and that's not somethin i say much
The little outro mixing thing is just amazing
Goddamn :worship:

100/10 no doubt

When this tape comes out it's gonna just shit on anything else, i can see it
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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Apr 10th, '08, 12:14

flow is flawless and lyrics are good
as bar said...the hook doesnt work 100% with the beat..but its okay
beat itsself is pretty good..... :y: nice piano
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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby Xray » Apr 10th, '08, 12:18

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:didnt like it, noise that comes in on the chorus (bass or organ or something) was disgustingly cheesy, the beat itself is good but it just doesnt sound good with the vocals.

mc wise its good, chorus was a nice but didnt work with the beat imo, rhyming was nice, best thing was the flow.


dunno just dont like this track :sweating:

damn, no worries bro its not the end of the world, there is more songs on the ep believe it or not :p
and thanks for checking it out btw :worship:

@ kez :o thats why i rap :o for people like you :o thanks for the feedback bro really really appreciate it :worship: :worship: and word about tha ep shitting on anything else :whistle:

@ chris..thanks bro appreciate the feed :worship:
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Re: New Single!! Psychopath

Postby Tash8 » Apr 10th, '08, 14:55

everyone thanks for feed. sajjad and I will discuss it and we might remix the sounds and hook for the tape.

sajjad did great on this, believe it or not, I loved the hook.
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