NEW SONG - Act This Way- Vettori Ft Nef

[Vettori]

New Song On Myspace, "Act This Way Vettori Ft Nef

http://www.myspace.com/VettoriMusic

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really good track, sick beat.


first verse had really nice lyrics and i was feeling the delivery and flow alot generaly had a sick vibe to it

hate the chorus, sorry just dont think its good

second verse, lyrics were nice aswell flow was really good delivery was sick

you part in third verse, same as your verse really, and nef's part was the same aswell


preferred nef's contribution in this, he didnt kill it or anything i just enjoyed his vibe on this alot lol


but yeah apart from the hook, sick track

[Vettori]

Thanks man appreciate it

I was so drunk when i did the chorus lol >.<

I new ahead of time it wasnt gonna be the best, but it works

[Xray]

cool song but the chorus was very gay indeed. nef did pretty good on it aswell as you. not your best but good 8/10

feed others if you want more feed

[NefariousPMT]

Thanks for the feedback i appreciate it more than you think!

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No doubt good track Eminem

[Steve Spag]

Major props dude.

Every track you drop you show improvement. I didn't mind the hook at all to this to be honest, I thought it was pretty hot. A sick beat, your flow was on point, rhyme scheme was nuts, and everything just fit perfectly.

Keep it up dude .

You should stop by Windsor on a weekend and get down on a track with me, haha.

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verse 1 has a crazy crazy flow...and nice pronouncation...delievery is good on it aswell
hook is pretty okay...a lil lil bit gay
verse 2 nice one vet...ryhmes are dope good flow too...
verse 3 nef killed ya...sorry..haha...but overall still great shit by both
*downloads*

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[Hadez]

i agree with everybody else, the chorus was wack

Nef reminds me of Jin alot, which is by no means a bad thing. i really enjoyed his parts

i liked your lyrics, (i wear rags too ) the flow was good too.

beat was great, and the lyrics go well with it.

good job on this

[Speech]

hahah yeah the chorus sounds a lil gay..too bored if you ask me....but damn for the verses..all great..concepts and all was nice...can't see any lack...both of you ripped it..kept the flow with them type of lyrics, insane....just the chorus that fucked it up...still cool

8 / 10....btw on this one..nef really sounds like jin a bit

[NefariousPMT]

Lol thanks for all the feedback ima try n get up on tr more to comment others also record more songs i dunno where i sound like jin but thats only because i dont listen to jin i've only heard his freestyles and i think he's awesome at what he does so appreciate the compliment i've been progressing alot lately along with vettori and you have yet to see the best i can dish out i guarantee u that tr

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Lol thanks for all the feedback ima try n get up on tr more to comment others also record more songs i dunno where i sound like jin but thats only because i dont listen to jin i've only heard his freestyles and i think he's awesome at what he does so appreciate the compliment i've been progressing alot lately along with vettori and you have yet to see the best i can dish out i guarantee u that tr

im a huge jin fan got all his albums imported and shit so just wanted to re-assure you that you aint biting no style or anything, i wouldnt say you sound like jin, your rhyme structure is a little like jins, but thats dope coz people dont appreciate how jin structures his raps and its dope.

anywae i dunno how these people can say you sound like jin coz i cant see the comparison and i listen to the guy like every day. at most your accents are similiar thats about it.

[Vettori]

Thanks to all for the feedback, Its good, as i said I was retardedly drunk when i did the chorus so i thought it would of sounded better, but either or, The verses covored The song good, and the chorus isnt horrible so, Thanks lol...and I dont see any comparison with Nef and Jin Lol....None. They rap way differant anyways thanks,

Btw to those who said " comment on others and ull get more feed in return" I try to be on this site as much as i can, This is where it all started for me, and ive been on this forum for Longer then most of you lol..I do try to leave feed when i can...I just am rarely on, too much goin on locally

BTW New Song droppin in a bit, probably this weekend, Its fuckin dope i think, I made up for this chorus, by makin it as good as i could

[Speech]

Lol thanks for all the feedback ima try n get up on tr more to comment others also record more songs i dunno where i sound like jin but thats only because i dont listen to jin i've only heard his freestyles and i think he's awesome at what he does so appreciate the compliment i've been progressing alot lately along with vettori and you have yet to see the best i can dish out i guarantee u that tr

im a huge jin fan got all his albums imported and shit so just wanted to re-assure you that you aint biting no style or anything, i wouldnt say you sound like jin, your rhyme structure is a little like jins, but thats dope coz people dont appreciate how jin structures his raps and its dope.

anywae i dunno how these people can say you sound like jin coz i cant see the comparison and i listen to the guy like every day. at most your accents are similiar thats about it.

that might be the point here...you listen to jin alot..i checked out his albums..2 of them..and thatz it..maybe a coupla freestyles but i didn study him..if you listen to him alot, you can tell alotta diff. and i don think they sound the same in flow exactly..just the voice a little...didn compare him fully but i know where it's coming from