STICCY Z new song "It's Happenin"

[<Stiiccy>]

Ok yall ive been workin very hard on my lyrics lately...so peep this song out called "It's Happenin"
go to my myspace http://www.myspace.com/sticcycickstudios313

heres they lyrics:

verse 1
gettin raw looks, as soon as i walk through the door, they think im a felon, but not what im convicted for, but one day ill be shinin, it make ya eyes sore, kinda like the sun, aimin straight for the earths core,

everyday say thanks, cuzz we gotta nice lord, we need that rain, and mixer i cant afford, so poor got my feet hangin out the car floor board, look older than anicient flinstone folklore, hate is what drives me, love im diening,

gotta stick to rap, cuzz know jobs will hire me, i gotta be signed, after this rap i am firing, id burn alive in the booth, if water wasnt by me, i wont get involved in battles, unless you wanna try me, evolve into two heads,

yes id be simeise, start off the rap like, hey dont you wish you had this, you cant tear through this rymes, they have double padding,



verse 2
never overated, just to unstable, ill go backwards on ya, i came from the grave to the cradle, forget a contract, ill just buy out the label, get fat and eat the mic, choke on the red cables, be big enough like three men, im my own stable,

since im like that i aint solo, be renamed to sticcy and the sensationals, i aint no thug, just a white honkey, ten girls on th line, and they all callin me, my lyrics speak truth, like iiaid and the oddasey, gotta alot of enimies,

cuzz people aint fond of the, outlooks and attides, that i am sponcering, all im sayin is be you are, not what they want you to be, emotionaly gone, like america will be, when we run outta firearms, and this credit cards droppin bombs on us


verse 3
forget about a benz, ill drive with some finz, i guarenntee you, it will be equvilent, to fat guys racin skinny men, cuzz im good with my ends, i get be on a major label, and still solcite my cds to collection kids, i would neva follow faggot,

mainstream treands, this me contributin, even if its dividends, break into a farm, and only steal roosters and hens, get caught sellin to the farm men im tryin to harm them!!,

you want my opinion, read it and weap, gas prices should be cheep, and hillary clinton wait all democrats give the creeps, better than all you idiots, its like comparin a whole pond, to a kitchen sink,

forget lyricisim dogg, im on a whole other level, you cats diggin wid hoes, but im diggin with shovels, im findin gold, and you findin dirt pebbals, you flower is barly grown, and mine has 7 pettals


please leave feeback...i would appriciate it yall...and ill try to feed yalls shit to

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice intro lol

you got a nice jumpy flow that ya either love or hate, your got a energetic and emotional delivery witch is always great, you also control your voice well and the alteration is ear gripping witch i enjoy.

lyrics were good and i respect you trying to imprrove them.

all you need to do if get the flow to go a bit stronger right now its very simple and can get repetitive so you got to try get it goin smoother, other than that good track man, keep it up

[<Stiiccy>]

nice intro lol

you got a nice jumpy flow that ya either love or hate, your got a energetic and emotional delivery witch is always great, you also control your voice well and the alteration is ear gripping witch i enjoy.

lyrics were good and i respect you trying to imprrove them.

all you need to do if get the flow to go a bit stronger right now its very simple and can get repetitive so you got to try get it goin smoother, other than that good track man, keep it up

thanks bar...feels good hearin that from you

[Emadyville]

Ok, the delivery and and emotion was alright. You were catching up on a lot of your flows. And I wasn't really feeling some of those lines:

look older than anicient flinstone folklore,

you cant tear through this rymes, they have double padding,

get fat and eat the mic, choke on the red cables, be big enough like three men, im my own stable,

my lyrics speak truth, like iiaid and the oddasey

break into a farm, and only steal roosters and hens, get caught sellin to the farm men im tryin to harm them!!,
its like comparin a whole pond, to a kitchen sink,

you flower is barly grown, and mine has 7 pettals

I'm not trying to be a dick but I mean how were any of those relevant? I thought you had one real good line:

id burn alive in the booth, if water wasnt by me,

Need to work on rhyming and what your saying. Next time you put something up I'll check it out and see if you improved.

[<Stiiccy>]

Ok, the delivery and and emotion was alright. You were catching up on a lot of your flows. And I wasn't really feeling some of those lines:

look older than anicient flinstone folklore,

you cant tear through this rymes, they have double padding,

get fat and eat the mic, choke on the red cables, be big enough like three men, im my own stable,

my lyrics speak truth, like iiaid and the oddasey

break into a farm, and only steal roosters and hens, get caught sellin to the farm men im tryin to harm them!!,
its like comparin a whole pond, to a kitchen sink,

you flower is barly grown, and mine has 7 pettals

I'm not trying to be a dick but I mean how were any of those relevant? I thought you had one real good line:

id burn alive in the booth, if water wasnt by me,

Need to work on rhyming and what your saying. Next time you put something up I'll check it out and
see if you improved.

why the hell does it matter?? dude you obiously you dont know what any of the shit im sayin means...
ok im not gonna run down and explain to you what they mean,,,are you not american cuzz of your not i can understand...
but the point you are tryin to make doesnt make sence

[Hadez]

first off i really liked the beat

your delivery went well with the beat. kind of a silly, doin it to have fun kinda feel. nice job.

your flow seemed good most of the time, but every once in a while you'd rap a little faster to fit in longer parts of the lyrics, or forcing them to fit to the beat.

other than that it was nice. kinda unique in some ways, not somethin you typically hear.

[Epidemik]

haha i agree with bar, nice intro! very creative!

beat was good

the flow was jumpy which was cool, but as emadyville said sometimes it seemed like you were tryin to catch up on a lot of your flows or some lines had to many syllables which didnt really flow right.

the chorus was pretty dope.

maybe memorize your lines if you havnt. (it always helps me with the delivery)

overall good stuff man! keep it commin. practice makes perfect.

[<Stiiccy>]

thanks for the feed yall

[Jay-19]

Reminded me of that Eminem song, "Foolish Pride" a little bit.

I don't really like this one. I see what you're doing with the flow, but I don't like it. Some lines are way too long to fit the song, at least that's what I think.

The lyrics were aight, some good ones in there. The intro was very cool and i like the chorus.

And your voice is awesome dude!

[<Stiiccy>]

Reminded me of that Eminem song, "Foolish Pride" a little bit.

I don't really like this one. I see what you're doing with the flow, but I don't like it. Some lines are way too long to fit the song, at least that's what I think.

The lyrics were aight, some good ones in there. The intro was very cool and i like the chorus.

And your voice is awesome dude!

lol at the foolish pride comment lol
umm well this is more of my "funny" playful type party tracks i guess...i tried to do something like "the real slim shady" just my own type shit ya know?
and i tried to be as lyrical as i could...

and thanks for the comment about my voice to...

[Tornado]

Beat was weird but you flowed to it nicely most of the time, but some of the time you tried to cram in words coz your lines had too many syllables which made it hard to understand but other than that i kinda like it keep going

[Jay-19]

Reminded me of that Eminem song, "Foolish Pride" a little bit.

I don't really like this one. I see what you're doing with the flow, but I don't like it. Some lines are way too long to fit the song, at least that's what I think.

The lyrics were aight, some good ones in there. The intro was very cool and i like the chorus.

And your voice is awesome dude!

lol at the foolish pride comment lol
umm well this is more of my "funny" playful type party tracks i guess...i tried to do something like "the real slim shady" just my own type shit ya know?
and i tried to be as lyrical as i could...

and thanks for the comment about my voice to...

Well, if it's a playful track, than I guess it's pretty tight.

[Big Proof 4ever]

well yeah intro is cool,but dont like beat pretty anoying for me(but its just taste)flow is aight too but not my style,u did a good job on this,but i dont feel this song cuz its not my type

[<Stiiccy>]

well yeah intro is cool,but dont like beat pretty anoying for me(but its just taste)flow is aight too but not my style,u did a good job on this,but i dont feel this song cuz its not my type

yeah this is one pf those songs that you either love or you hate

[Xray]

dylated eyes did good on the intro and his/there? parts, you didn't do as well but you did show effort