STICCY Z NEW DISS TRACK

[<Stiiccy>]

well some more fuckin kids wanna fuck with me so i put this 2 faggots in there place
peep it its called ROCKSTAR DISS cuzz the guy is called "rockstar" (i know what i corny name)
peep it on my myspace http://www.myspace.com/sticcycickstudios313

heres the lyrics:

verse 1
more kids wanna, play with the masters of craft, i gotta court case commin, cuzz this kids gettin slapped, start da clock, heres ya 3 minitus of fame, ring up the bell, hear the rockstar scream, great gimic to, by the way i add,

emo an a wigger, mix in to fads, you look like the singer from greenday,had baby with young jeezy, but for you thats to pleasing, got you all sucidal, dont pull a sean kingston, im a whole bike, and you are my kick stan,

my diss sinkin in your head, just like quick sand, faggot dont play, ill have you done in an instant, whats yo struggle, was it bad in great falls, you got beat up everyday, stop tryin to act hard, you cant come back,

but all of us is waitin, cross the state line, go staright to a community, to bad its gated,




verse 2
ya minds so simple, cuzz sittin on a spindle, not the dude, but he can get killed to, ohh wait he cant, he's stuck in his moms house, hes pilled out, and he just got his but filled up, you see me, you got a gun for protection,

but you to busy doin rockstar, call that westside connection, if i really wanted yall out, id just say fetch him, residents of great falls, in spokanesdirection, you say i sound like jizz,

i think so to, cuzz thats all im sprayin, when ya moms in my bedroom, ohh did i say my, we use yours all the time, pullin out ya sock, to dry ya moms eye, go get a dna test kid, but i aint payin child support, but heres 50 bucks.

for a new sock drawer, dont think playin dog this is serious, you like the monkey, stop bein curios george

[<Stiiccy>]

Ok. I will be full and honest:

Flow: I honestly enjoyed it for the most part, the problem is your trying to flow on the snare. Don't. It makes you fall off several times. But overall 8/10 on flow.

Voice: A bit low and edgy at times, horrorcore none the less. I like it, but try to raise it a bit.

Structure: Not so good, as with everyone else here. DO NOT FLOW ON THE SNARE.

Lyrics: Decent. Not bad for a Diss track, peeped some other tracks of yours, not bad.


Overall 7/10. Would be a 7.5/10 if you raise your voice, and it would jump to an 8/10 if your didn't fall.


Keep it up, I actually enjoyed the track.

thanks man i appriciate that shit...
lol i was gettin worried that no one was gonna feed my shit lol

[Cwayon_Murder]

I think its pretty good. One of your best songs in my opinion. Agree with McMaybe's opinion about your flow, but it has improved a lot since the first time I heard you. It just always sounds like you're trying to make your voice sound angry, but I think you overdo it at some points. But it fits the horrorcore theme here, and I really like the beat as well. Umm that's all I could say. I'm not too good at giving feedback. =/
But nice song overall. Good job.

[<Stiiccy>]

I think its pretty good. One of your best songs in my opinion. Agree with McMaybe's opinion about your flow, but it has improved a lot since the first time I heard you. It just always sounds like you're trying to make your voice sound angry, but I think you overdo it at some points. But it fits the horrorcore theme here, and I really like the beat as well. Umm that's all I could say. I'm not too good at giving feedback. =/
But nice song overall. Good job.

yeah ive been tryin not to have such an "angry" type voice but with this beat i kinda had to

[<Stiiccy>]

yeah i mean im not totally changin my voice...im just gonna control it..cuzz sometimes my emotion kinda takes away from things in the song like you said

[-[Zach]-]

damn homie...those lyrics are pretty aggressive. i'm really feeling the anger in them for real. definately a nice diss track. major props

[<Stiiccy>]

damn homie...those lyrics are pretty aggressive. i'm really feeling the anger in them for real. definately a nice diss track. major props

thanks man

[Makaveli525]

Well first off, your voice is tight.

You remind me of Canibus almost.

Which makes it perfect for this type of track.

You got your emotion in there fa reals... nice delivering, really adds energy to the joint.

On the real, everything else was good, with the exception of a few flow problems McMaybe already pointed out.

That was some dope shit.

I never checked your raps before... but keep it up, its hot

[<Stiiccy>]

Well first off, your voice is tight.

You remind me of Canibus almost.

Which makes it perfect for this type of track.

You got your emotion in there fa reals... nice delivering, really adds energy to the joint.

On the real, everything else was good, with the exception of a few flow problems McMaybe already pointed out.

That was some dope shit.

I never checked your raps before... but keep it up, its hot

thanks man love your sig man lol
but yeah i always try to put emotion in my shit

[DelinQuent]

this was good. i liked it as well. mcmaybe noted the negatives and those are the only ones i could pick out as well. great job.

one this is about flowing on the snare, you can flow on the snare as long as you don't try to stuff words in just to make a certain word hit on the snare, try to count syllables.

[<Stiiccy>]

this was good. i liked it as well. mcmaybe noted the negatives and those are the only ones i could pick out as well. great job.

one this is about flowing on the snare, you can flow on the snare as long as you don't try to stuff words in just to make a certain word hit on the snare, try to count syllables.

thanks for the feed bro!!

[Rain Matrix]

good quality... took some nice shots... beat overpowerd u in some spots
but overall it was listenable... keep at it good job

[Vettori]

Qualitys the one thing holdin u back, Just you knowing yu lack quality makes u work less hard, I can tell, I did the same....FLows dope dont get me wrong, and i feel Like if you Stuck to topic better ud be sick

[<Stiiccy>]

Qualitys the one thing holdin u back, Just you knowing yu lack quality makes u work less hard, I can tell, I did the same....FLows dope dont get me wrong, and i feel Like if you Stuck to topic better ud be sick

well thanks bro

[<VerbalTouch>]

No Offence but your voice sounds better for more rock songs