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NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Vettori » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:03

New song on myspace
http://www.Myspace.com/VettoriMusic

Leave some feed tell me what you think

Im on the chorus and second verse

Tried makin it better then my last
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:13

wow awsome song bro

ok first verse...not the best flow ever but it was still good loved the dubbs in his shit...

hook was fuckin awsome 10/10 on the hook

second verse...you cam in with FIRE some of the stuff you were sayin were some what simple rymes but you couldnt notice them with the way you flowed it...

3rd verse same thing great flow....

awsome quality to..

great beat

song gets a : 8.5/10
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Vettori » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:16

Thank man, Love the feed :D :b:
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Postby Cwayon_Murder » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:18

Lol, I was listening to it when you made this thread.

Well first off, I really like the beat. And your quality is great in all your songs.
Very nice job on the hook. I think you got a good voice for that purpose specifically.
The first verse (J-reyes right?) was pretty good. Nothing bad I can really say about him.
Your verse was very nice as well. But I can't help but be reminded of Eminem when I listen to you :p. I dunno why, but you just remind me of him >.<. But you got great flow, man. Keep it up.
Overall I'd say 8.75/10. I'd make it higher but in MY opinion, your other songs are better. But still, keep putting out new shit. You got a great style.
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:20

Vettori wrote:Thank man, Love the feed :D :b:

yeah man you should go feed my new songs....
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Vettori » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:24

All i want is the honest opinions :D Thanks man, And sure ill check out some tracks now
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:38

Fuck you for ignorin my request :angry:

But on the real side it was pretty dope but some of the lyrics were kinda played like used around.
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Vettori » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:41

Thanks man, and what yu mean Ignore ur request, Im baked right now, which means im possibly a little slower then normal
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:45

Vettori wrote:Thanks man, and what yu mean Ignore ur request, Im baked right now, which means im possibly a little slower then normal



you didn get my pm? Askin for a callabo :confusion:
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Vettori » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:48

no lol, i dont have any awaiting pms, havnt for a while now

but even still ive got a few projects to finish so ill be gettin the collabs done later
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:49

Igh Im always open lemme know when you can get at it

you make those beats?
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Vettori » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:52

Naw ive tried makin beats, Learned from some good Producers, But Still not comfertable with that shit yet, But ive made beats i can spit too
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:54

Word My fault had a crazy intro beat you got yim?
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Cwayon_Murder » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:55

Vettori wrote:Naw ive tried makin beats, Learned from some good Producers, But Still not comfertable with that shit yet, But ive made beats i can spit too


Where you get your beats from then? Because they're fucking sick.
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Re: NEW SONG ( Away From Me) VETTORI

Postby Vettori » Apr 22nd, '08, 03:17

Soundclick,

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