Battle song from another site.. Rate the verse

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Tell me what you think, I'll post the personals aswell


http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6487488



Admiring the stages & watching cartoons are his prior engagements
catch a case; child abuse.. if i was to style dude
his motherfucking battle records higher than his age is
dont get him fibbing he aint firing the gauges
Just a by-stander in a serious sport
While I'm playing Highlander wit a serious sword
im the serious sort..
type to trample competition wit a furious horde
& if you curious george I
make ya eyes pop out like curious george
sorry its a habbit its
kinda like the quote that you posted on da ave, its...
got me thinking this dudes a girly typa faggot
In high heels wid sydeil while he's getting shafted
if rap were a sport team youd never get drafted
sii'll leave ya more creamed than playing in traffic
considering my punches.. Its plain & its graphic
how They stab arab; resulting in a tragic
Calamity, damnit he's.. really on a war path
show me what the scores at
3 & 0 me man how you gonna forge that
we're sickened of ya bored act.. we need suttin new
I'll Treat my punches like a fever when they heat up in you
& Bring the fleet to ya crew...
aint ya seen my credentials man? read the review


- His battle record is '15' and hes like 13? lol
- Curious george in his sig
- Sydeil's quote in his sig
- He's arabian

[Rain Matrix]

this was a dope drop no matter where it's posted

[Emadyville]

Pretty good shit.

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Battle songs go in the Audio Battle Section

It was from another site, so it shouldnt go there because there's no battle.. I want it to be rated

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Audio battles for THIS site get posted there.. lol, sigh.. whatever just rate it.

Rain/Emidy: thanks to both of you.

[Xray]

your delivery is a practice delivery not something that should be used for final mix. as for your voice, sounds like your biting your tongue while spitting. As for the camel picture cause your opponent is from middle east is pathetically stupid. beat sucked balls, your voice was like 2 db louder than the beat. flow isn't good either, only thing that was good was the lyrics, beside that, this song is trash

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your delivery is a practice delivery not something that should be used for final mix. as for your voice, sounds like your biting your tongue while spitting. As for the camel picture cause your opponent is from middle east is pathetically stupid. beat sucked balls, your voice was like 2 db louder than the beat. flow isn't good either, only thing that was good was the lyrics, beside that, this song is trash

LOL my number 1 hater. Actually, I'm perfectly on beat lil duke and I *KNOW* delivery is pretty much on point, so stop hating--I dont come into your threads, do i? Catching feelings cos hes arabian and youre some sand lover too? OFF THE DICK HOMIE.

The beat's a VTZ beat by the way, so yeah... goodjob tryna diss the beat LMAO, dumbass.

[Xray]

your delivery is a practice delivery not something that should be used for final mix. as for your voice, sounds like your biting your tongue while spitting. As for the camel picture cause your opponent is from middle east is pathetically stupid. beat sucked balls, your voice was like 2 db louder than the beat. flow isn't good either, only thing that was good was the lyrics, beside that, this song is trash

LOL my number 1 hater. Actually, I'm perfectly on beat lil duke and I *KNOW* delivery is pretty much on point, so stop hating--I dont come into your threads, do i? Catching feelings cos hes arabian and youre some sand lover too? OFF THE DICK HOMIE.

The beat's a VTZ beat by the way, so yeah... goodjob tryna diss the beat LMAO, dumbass.

no one's dissing anyone, thats my opinion on your song and doesn't matter who the beats produced by, every producer has good and bad beats and that one might be good to you but its not good to me, lack of taste, stupid. And no im not offended of that picture because where i come from, i just think its child's play and very uncreative. Of course that camel image appears to a racist, and its so predictable. And if you think im hating than whatever, you've always been paranoid so don't stop now

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your delivery is a practice delivery not something that should be used for final mix. as for your voice, sounds like your biting your tongue while spitting. As for the camel picture cause your opponent is from middle east is pathetically stupid. beat sucked balls, your voice was like 2 db louder than the beat. flow isn't good either, only thing that was good was the lyrics, beside that, this song is trash

LOL my number 1 hater. Actually, I'm perfectly on beat lil duke and I *KNOW* delivery is pretty much on point, so stop hating--I dont come into your threads, do i? Catching feelings cos hes arabian and youre some sand lover too? OFF THE DICK HOMIE.

The beat's a VTZ beat by the way, so yeah... goodjob tryna diss the beat LMAO, dumbass.

no one's dissing anyone, thats my opinion on your song and doesn't matter who the beats produced by, every producer has good and bad beats and that one might be good to you but its not good to me, lack of taste, stupid. And no im not offended of that picture because where i come from, i just think its child's play and very uncreative. Of course that camel image appears to a racist, and its so predictable. And if you think im hating than whatever, you've always been paranoid so don't stop now

You spew shit that makes no sense youngn.. "paranoid"--Lmao the fuck you on? Keep faking your accent and I'll keep being real, aight?

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Ok both of you guys, fucking quit it right now and stop acting dumb as fuck

you starting to piss me off acting like a moderator and some peace protester, so stop it.

K block was right in posting it in here its not for a battle on this site hes just looking for feedback on this site.

really i noticed you "modding" nearly every thread you post in so stop it.

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the internet doesnt piss me off, people do.

and the modersators are doin there jobs, the moderator log is full of loads of threads/posts moved/deleted that no members ever see or notice because the mods do there jobs, coz they miss 5 out of 100 doesnt mean they aint doin there job.

as for arguin/debatin, when it gets out of hands mods deal with it.

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^^YEAH! lol..


how about........... rate my verse?