[NEW] Look Inside Yourself [PROMO]

by **Kez** » Apr 25th, '08, 18:06

Just a track i decided to make to promote my tape that's in the works. It's nowhere near complete, but i haven't released anything for the past month or so, so i thought i'd just post something as a preview of what to expect. It's by no stretch the best thing that's gonna be found on my tape (this isn't even gonna be on my tape), it's just a track i made with my new mic to test the quality.

Look Inside Yourself (Produced by Hadez)

Kez wrote:I'm crazy, i'm zany, a rapper who's taking
The beats and mutating them to create the songs he's making
Don't try to criticise me, cause you don't know what you're saying
Uh Oh, i listened to too much Hayzi
So hate me, cause listen that wasn't a diss
Hayzi's mint, disagree? Then start suckin his dick
This is hip hop music, dont say hip hop isn't this
Expression of agression, when i'm fucking with pricks
This is me, Universal part 2, this is a promo
Think you understand me? Random'll tell you that [they don't know!]
But if you listen then maybe you'll sympathise, stop with the low blows
Stop being homos and see the skill that i have honed, so
I looked inside myself to grab my skill from my chest
So look inside yourself, while i have cardiac arrest
Realise you're shit and you can't attack the best
My shit is like beats from Mart when he's at his best
I'm not obsessed with this shit, but it's a subject that i understand
And rap music turned me to a fucking man
I've grown, i've matured, so you know i'm the lure
To non hip hop listeners who fuckin won't find the cure
To their pain, unless they accept hip hop into their brains
Their pathetic fallacy be forever shrouded in rain
And yeah i'm insane, deranged and fuckin gay
But you will never gain the skill that i have gained
And obtained...

PS: I have no idea where the Hayzi reference came from, it's just Uh-Oh is a song that got stuck in my head so it just came to me while writing.

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » Apr 25th, '08, 18:18

nice lil track...mixing could be better but oh well
waiting for Universal Part 2 :flower:

by **Emadyville** » Apr 25th, '08, 18:21

Ok for some reason didn't work to hear the track, so I only have thoughts on the lyrics. I thought this was a good rhyme and line:

But if you listen then maybe you'll sympathise, stop with the low blows
Stop being homos and see the skill that i have honed, so

Didn't like when you rhymed best and best, just annoys me when people use the exact same word. I thought overall the verse was ok, and didn't understand the end saying "I'm fucking gay" not sure why you put that in, what you were trying to say, or whatever, just didn't make sense to me, wish it worked so I could of heard it. But nice job nonetheless.

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Apr 25th, '08, 19:18

your quality is alot better, just not mixed as well as it could be lol

lyrics wise it was a good track solid through-out, flow was good whole way through, beat wasnt great but it was a good little promo track, keep it up man :y:

by **DelinQuent** » Apr 25th, '08, 20:12

damn man. when did you get this good? lol. good shit kez, i used to hate your voice but it's good now. good lyrics, good pronunciation. great rhymes. flow was absolutely flawless. 9/10 i loved it. :worship:

by **Tornado** » Apr 25th, '08, 21:38

you should rework that into a track man, just mix it properly and get a new beat :y:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Apr 25th, '08, 21:54

DelinQuent wrote:damn man. when did you get this good?

lol that made my day, im not commenting on you becuase to my knowledge youve never had a problem with kez, but back when he started out loads of members here hated on him saying hed never get that good, i love the fact there all eating there words now, then add to it that this is only a promo and that kez is still really young and you got a shit load of humble pie to serve out :smoking:

by **DelinQuent** » Apr 26th, '08, 07:16

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:
DelinQuent wrote:damn man. when did you get this good?

lol that made my day, im not commenting on you becuase to my knowledge youve never had a problem with kez, but back when he started out loads of members here hated on him saying hed never get that good, i love the fact there all eating there words now, then add to it that this is only a promo and that kez is still really young and you got a shit load of humble pie to serve out

me and kez never had a problem but i remember maybe like maybe a year ago and i thought kez was no good. but i never told him to stop or anything lol. i'd never tell anyone to stop. but daaaaaayum, what a turn around lol.

by **Kez** » Apr 26th, '08, 10:20

Chet wrote:damn dude how did your quality get so much better? I wanna know

New mic!

Thanks to all others for their feed :y:

@ Bar: Thanks a lot, that means a lot :y:

@ DQ: Don't worry, i know you had no problems with me

by **Hadez** » Apr 26th, '08, 11:32

somebody actually used my beat? :unsure:

it's a good track. something i really enjoyed while listening was that you're take on the beat was different than how i would've done it. i'd've flowed a little slower. but you made it work nicely.

the lyrics were nice,
"I looked inside myself to grab my skill from my chest
So look inside yourself, while i have cardiac arrest"
i liked that part alot.

good work on it. and it's a good thing it's just promo cuz it doesn't sound like many people liked the beat. :sweating:

by **Big Proof 4ever** » Apr 26th, '08, 14:48

well i dont like this beat alot but still sick song man :worship:

by **B.A.D.** » Apr 26th, '08, 17:10

gotta say

insane shit-.... shame its too short

lyrics where great.... flow was perfect

hadez: nice work on the beat bro!

yo kez.. the mart line was off the hook!, keep it like dat bro, this was damn good

THE MOST ANNOYING PT.2 COMING SOON!!!