STICCY Z NEW TRACK FEAT SONNY

[<Stiiccy>]

Yep i finally got this track done that Ive been hard at work on...
its a slow type song and im very proud of it,,,,
i got my homie sonny from the dirty south on it....
go to my myspace at http://www.myspace.com/sticcycickstudios313
feedback is very appriciated yall

heres the lyrics

now paradise is to far away, the past has shakin up, and future i set today, the future is clear , but i think im stuck here, lets imagine if it was all a good, and everything was cheers,

lets open new doors, flip the past a bird, open yo mind, forget what you heard, but just one occasion, im talkin bout forever, what if its was all good, and we could all live together




now its not long ago, i thoughts of homaside, i opened my eyes, just to find out who am i, forget about yo opinion, its mine that really matters, you aint doin nuttin, scater with the others, forget about a gang,

lets wear da same colers, in Gods eyes homie, we all are brothas, look i know i aint a preacher, i know i aint saint, but ive found myself and i have changed, forget about the fame, i own this game, we cleanin it up,

cuzz its gotta a big stain, i keep it real, dont want a record deal, i rep for the trailer parks, and cars with no windsheilds, we all need a take a look, at our on reflections, lets clean it up, so the future aint aint infectshus

no racist no sexsist, from new york to texas, get ever rap hero, on a track to wreak this,




why they blame others, but neva look at they self, goverment corruption, makin lives livin hells, its like a silent war, takin place all around us, learn from mistakes, and everthing you encounter, america we to shelterd,

at only times do we feel it, no way to make money, some people end up sellin, this the final battle, croked cop and a good felon, they make him use fist, and let cops pop pelets, its a bad world, yes this i know,

fussin at teacher, make his head explode, ill neva forget that day, that dude in my face, i out smarted that coach, i dont play those games, the next time you try to step, make it effectful, hit me dog

ill have plasterd in the record booth, i think i know where you headed to, but ill let ya find out ya self, just grab that bible homie, its right there ya shelf,

[Big Proof 4ever]

even i aint fan of ur voice but this song is damn good rly,good job man

[<Stiiccy>]

even i aint fan of ur voice but this song is damn good rly,good job man

thanks homie

[<Stiiccy>]

BUMP since you actually give feed and you deserve more then 2 replies lol

i know right...i guess ill have to go PM'ING AND BOTHER PEOPLE TILL THEY LEAVE FEED

[<VerbalTouch>]

Whats it called i aint hearin a new song or am i goin blind

[<Stiiccy>]

Whats it called i aint hearin a new song or am i goin blind

"turnin the pages"

[<VerbalTouch>]

Igh I heard it yeah it aint that bad where you keep findin those instrumentals?

[<Stiiccy>]

Igh I heard it yeah it aint that bad where you keep findin those instrumentals?

its my little secret

[<Stiiccy>]

ok forget this IT IS TRUE...I USE MY DICK TO MAKE BEATS...ITS OFF THE CHAIN...AND I WILL NEVER SHOW ANYONE HOW TO DO IT EXCEPT FOR CHET'S GIRLFREIND...
lol j/k

[<VerbalTouch>]

Pift no one wans your shit beats anyway

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

ooh shit i didnt like the track at all....chorus made it listen-able
but quality is fucked...flow is choppy.....i couldnt follow the lyrics (if these are the real lyrics) cuz i understood somthin complete different...lol
sry and your singin doesnt work at all

[DelinQuent]

my bad, i didn't see your thread.

verses are good. flow doesn't seem to match the beat very well. chorus is too whiney. and i couldn't understand what he was sayin. i like the idea of this song. you're voice sounded too angry to go with what you were saying.

a good track tho. 8/10

[Kez]

Love this beat, another Rapitfly classic
Rhyming is a bit simple, but the actual lyrics and meanings is some good shit
The flow is pretty good, slips a few times though
Delivery sounds alright, needs a bit of improvement
I think the hook isn't actually too bad, your voice is definetly unique in it
Your feat can be ranked basically the same as you
The flows are a bit slow and sometimes go off, but mostly sound good
Your delivery are alright but they don't sound completely ferocious yet if you get me, you're trying to sound angry but you don't quite sound fully angry
Lyrics, rhymes are a bit simple but the actual lyrics are great in terms of wordplay and meaning
Hook i like
Beat i like
Concept i like

Good track overall

8/10

[<Stiiccy>]

thanks for the feed yall...
ill be sure to return the favor
chris idk man sorry you didnt like it

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

nuttin to be sorry about...different tastes i guess
keep it up and maybe someday i'll like your tracks