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[Emadyville]

2 New songs, The Return and Prodigal, lookin for feedback because only Chet did when I posted before (thanks Chet). So please listen and tell me what you think. Both are at http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

[Jay-19]

I really like the song Prodigal! The chorus is very nice.
The lyrics are a bit simple at some places, but hey, I don't give a fuck when you have such good delivery and flow. God damn it! I can't drop that chorus! It's not very nice, it's fucking awesome!
Overall, a really good track. You got good quality, nice delivery and a fucking insane chorus.
8/10

The Return was really not my cup of tea. I think your voice is a little bit high to really fit the beat well. I don't like your flow that much either. It's a bit "choppy" at some parts. The delivery could've been better in my opinion. But I know you can spit, so keep it up dude!
5.5/10

[Emadyville]

Simple lyrics? Where were there simple lyrics in Prodigal? Just curious, because the first 2 verses I thought were intense with the rhymes. Thank you for the feed though I appreciate it.

[Jay-19]

Simple lyrics? Where were there simple lyrics in Prodigal? Just curious, because the first 2 verses I thought were intense with the rhymes. Thank you for the feed though I appreciate it.

Well, it just didn't seem complex. You know? But that's just what I feel. In my opinion, the track doesn't need complexity, it's dope as it is.

[Emadyville]

I guess I meant lyrically, cause I thought the rhymes in the first 2 were pretty sick. I mean honestly, not trying to ride my own dick, I know the third was simple for rhymes.