Won't Hesitate[SECOND RAP]

[Darkblade44431]

This is my second rap. Its really short, and i dont think i'm gonna add any more lyrics besides maybe the hook. Anyways, i'm not exactly finished yet. But i'm workin on it, and i think it sounded better than my first rap[homicidal maniac] at least. i also might change the beat, plus, before i record it for a CD or some shit, i'll have to also memorize it instead of reading it. lol, yeah, listen to the last verse, i'm a damn fast reader huh? ok, so anyways, tell me what you think of it so far.
here's the link:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/112815655441f8a0/

[<VerbalTouch>]

Sounds like you x2 the speed also the moic is to close pull it back a bit

[Darkblade44431]

lmao, does it? well thats how i was talking, and i cant pull it back, its a headset and the mic is connected to the earphones. but i should probably not be so damn loud, especially cuz u cud hear the POP at that one part. lol, you never really said how the song was though... mind elaborating on that?

[<VerbalTouch>]

Well it aint bad for your 2nd way better then that harry potter shit you put out.

[Darkblade44431]

Thanks man. lol, dumbledore rap, yeah, i told kez i wasnt serious but it was like nothin would convince him, he thought i was so serious about that song. haha, yeh just made that cuz i was bored and thought it'd be funny.

[<VerbalTouch>]

yyup now go feed mine

[Robbie G]

i thought it was pretty good, but way too fast

[Darkblade44431]

thanks. hmm..i thought it sounded good considering the lyrics but i dunno, i just started.
edit: actually, i think the beginning being so fast didnt sound so great.

[Nu Syd]

nice beat,doesnt suit a fast rap tho, work on your flow man stay up, lyrics need work to yo

[Block]

doesnt work for me

[Darkblade44431]

Alright, thanks for the comments guys.
and, mcmaybe, wtf?

[Jay-19]

Waaaaaaaaaaaaay to fast for me to even give feedback. The only feed i can give now is: slow it down man!

[SajN]

It ain't playing

[Cwayon_Murder]

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[Kez]

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