Soldier

[Emadyville]

I used the Soldier beat for a song I did, just wanted some feedback, it only downloaded as one portion so I just did one verse to it, feedback please! Thank you

http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

[Block]

i'm not one for 'famous' beats, really. youy flow kinda sounds like you're tryna keep up with the beat.

[pomp4434]

yo you were good but u picked my favorite song ever to rap over..so it was eh for me..

[<Stiiccy>]

ehh not to good man...
your flow was off...and the lyrics were just ok

[Emadyville]

Damn lot of diff responses but thanks everyone for responding.

[Emadyville]

Yo and chet how you putting that on your mp3?

[Emadyville]

Wtf? I have it on a mixtape for sale damnit.

[Jay-19]

ehh not to good man...
your flow was off...and the lyrics were just ok

Ummm, his flow ain't off...? I think the flow is really good on this, so is the lyrics. the delivery is tight as shit imo. I would really like to see a longer version of this song man. I think it could turn out really sick! Good shit man!

And I can't let the Prodigal chorus go! Can't get enough of it!

[Emadyville]

Well for one it sounds like a guy to me, and secondly, Mart85 on here made that beat.

[Emadyville]

I listened, sounds like a dude. Have to ask Mart

[Xray]

your strong American accent is putting down the quality of your songs. it also doesn't sound like an accent that should be used for rap. other than that, flow wasn't perfect but wasn't bad either. delivery was poor. didn't sound like you meant what you were saying, sounded like you were just reading and flowing your lyrics. keep it up

[Emadyville]

Accent? What the fuck you talking about. Damn every time I post something on here half of what I get sounds constructive and the other half sounds like you people have a warped view of rap.

[Emadyville]

Thanks Chet!

[<Stiiccy>]

Accent? What the fuck you talking about. Damn every time I post something on here half of what I get sounds constructive and the other half sounds like you people have a warped view of rap.

ok, i dont want to sound harsh but obiously you arent understand what were trying to tell you...
look you sound like a fuckin white ass suburben rich kid...(no hate im white just from the dirty part of town)
but go harder on your songs bro...
sound like you want the song to be taken,, if its a diss track act like you want to beat the fuck outta the guy...if its a girl song...act like your fuckin the beat bro...
just go harder man

[Kez]

Must say i'm surprised

Doing a track on this beat is a hard task, because Eminem did great on this

Best thing about this track is the flow, i like the flow on this beat for the most part. Pretty good.

Lyrics are pretty good too.

Delivery aint too good though.

Quality sounds fine.

Good track

PS: I loved Moment of Clarity.