*Whats The Difference Verse*

[Boston]

well, this is only 10 bars right now, and i know this is the audio section, which i do got, but very far from the best quality, i just recorded this on my phone quick to see how on/off flow was and shit like that. im supposed to record this friday at an actual studio so im trying to make this good. so please leave feed on what you think so far., thank you. (leave a link to your thread in here and ill leave feed if yall want) thanks

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1348772375daded0/

people seem not to understand that ima crazy dude/
getting on a track with fam put me ina crazy mood/
see im not a patient dude, so snort please dont take your time/
im already on 4 blunts, pills, and due for 8 more lines/
poppin' pills, empty bottles, i got a lot to fill/
but its not illegal; getting em from doctors still/
i keep my pockets filled, with weed and amoxicil/
keys in my locker still, n trees wit exotic smell/
not only into drugs, high off of killings too/
so when i move into town, know your whole village through/

[DelinQuent]

flow sounded good, but you sounded a bit bored, when you hit the studio try to get some swag into your voice. the rhymes were good. good shit, cant wait to hear good quality.

[Emadyville]

Didn't even listen cause you said it'd be diff but what I read was hot, nice song, nice lyrics, nice rhymes, seems like it'd flow nice, so good job, and post that when you done

[Boston]

thanks for the feed, and about the boring part, ha im sorry, bare with me. im going to try to put as much emotion as i can when i hit the studio, and try to have a swag people will catch on to, thanks for the feed

and emadyville, i would appreciate it if you go give it a listen though, because the flow would probaly sound the same and the lyrics haha, but if you dont want to you dont have to

thank you both

[Tornado]

u got a good flow on the track, but like DQ said , try and put in more emotion but it sounds promising..keep it up

[Kez]

u got a good flow on the track, but like DQ said , try and put in more emotion but it sounds promising..keep it up

I agree with this.

[B.A.D.]

wow

its actually very good... apart from the quality lol

I'm guessin you've been rapping for a short time, if that's so... real nice

the flow is good and u got a diferent style wich its crazy. rhymes are good..

damn, I wanna listen to this studio quality, good job on them 10's

[Boston]

all you thank for the feed
more would be nice haha
thanks

(and how did you know i was new)

[B.A.D.]

all you thank for the feed
more would be nice haha
thanks

(and how did you know i was new)

Big Ax-D = Genious

[Nu Syd]

what ax-d said, you got alota potential, nice one

[Boston]

thanks all
i hope i have potentional haha

[Kosovic]

Make it an mp3.

[<VerbalTouch>]

Quality sucks you really should get one of these guys to mix for it if you had good quality it would sound dope well im not one to judge but you need to speak up some more (Y)

[Boston]

thanks
any criticism/compliments or w/e will be helpful
thank you

[Speech]

maybe its just my ears but..i didn understand shit...lol....but your flow is ace ...more emotions : yes!!!!

keep it up...actually i really can't wait for the studio version