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Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby randomghost » Jun 16th, '08, 10:53

this the 1st single of ma upcoming album......the album project is goin crazy....i got like 8 or 9 tracks done so far....they all have different approaches....album name is no one can judge me....it will ft. local rappers in dubai (ma friends) like khalifa, mc-itty, and more still on the list......anyways i hope u guys enjoy the track...

here is the download link:

fixed layovers of DQ's verse

http://www.zshare.net/audio/13720070416ee565/

old version
http://www.zshare.net/audio/13693819a6d56294/

feed is appreciated :happy:
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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jun 16th, '08, 11:00

thatz a nice beat :y:
i dont know about the singin in the hook but oh well
ghost: ur quality sounds so...un clear...dont kow how to explain
but ur verse was kool...and pronouncation was good
spizzy: sick shit...wasnt feelin the half singin then rappin part...maybe u should decide for one..but still nice multies and delievery was kewl
DQ: flow was dope man...only thing that ruined ur verse were the overlays...in my opinion u placed them wrong...sounded weird :y:
waiting for the album :y:
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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby randomghost » Jun 16th, '08, 11:03

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:thatz a nice beat :y:
i dont know about the singin in the hook but oh well
ghost: ur quality sounds so...un clear...dont kow how to explain
but ur verse was kool...and pronouncation was good
spizzy: sick shit...wasnt feelin the half singin then rappin part...maybe u should decide for one..but still nice multies and delievery was kewl
DQ: flow was dope man...only thing that ruined ur verse were the overlays...in my opinion u placed them wrong...sounded weird :y:
waiting for the album :y:
thanks for the feed man...lol...about ma quality i think its the mic quality i dunno...and about Dq his verse is amazing ....as u said the overlays at the start was off a bit but still sounds good....thanks for checkin man :flower:
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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby Speech » Jun 16th, '08, 11:25

damn you made this the single..oops i think you told me on myspace lol....fire track...i like it...singin was cool...oh well you know what i think of this track...i shitted on both of you anyway hahaha j/k
dq verse was fire and the performance would have been ace, if the too much reverb didn bring it down...who mixed your verse? plus the overs didn match, but didn fuck it up so all cool
holy shit i couldn wait for the full version of this haha
great party song if that stupid spizzy wouldn be on this xD

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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby randomghost » Jun 16th, '08, 11:42

Speech wrote:damn you made this the single..oops i think you told me on myspace lol....fire track...i like it...singin was cool...oh well you know what i think of this track...i shitted on both of you anyway hahaha j/k
dq verse was fire and the performance would have been ace, if the too much reverb didn bring it down...who mixed your verse? plus the overs didn match, but didn fuck it up so all cool
holy shit i couldn wait for the full version of this haha
great party song if that stupid spizzy wouldn be on this xD

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lol..na its a single :happy: man ur verse was amazing...nice flow and delivery and am feelin the energy....couldnt release if ur not ft...haha :8)
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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby randomghost » Jun 16th, '08, 12:52

Chet wrote:I liked the singing, good job
The whole song just sounded unclear to me
Good verse RG I didn't hear nothing wrong with it
Chorus is a tad bit catchy, but it's more annoying lol
Speech had a good verse, I didn't like how some of the verse was about fighting.....it's a party song
DQ had a really good verse, but his verse just sounded weird and unclear as hell

So overall good song, I don't think good enough to be a 1st single. I think you might mix it again homie and that might help me like it more lol.
thanks for checkin man..i'll try to mix it again.. :happy:
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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 16th, '08, 16:11

My damn overlays. I'll re record them and send a new verse to random sometime today lol
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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jun 16th, '08, 16:13

terrible.


whats up with people on here doin club track,. your music will NEVER get played in a club untill your are signed and have a name so why try feed a taste your never goin to reach ?


anywae, bad song but speech did best on it
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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby Speech » Jun 16th, '08, 18:15

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:terrible.


whats up with people on here doin club track,. your music will NEVER get played in a club untill your are signed and have a name so why try feed a taste your never goin to reach ?


anywae, bad song but speech did best on it



oh shit :n: ....random didn plan to sell 4 mill of this..it's fun to do tracks like that...plus dq and me just hopped on this..waht you expect us to say? "oh sorry random i don wanna ft. your album because this track will never reach famous clubs"...?

it's for the fun of it...but thx for mentioning that you liked my verse most :whistle:

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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 16th, '08, 21:13

club tracks are good for demos to show you can do radio hits as well as regular songs. He anyone on this board EVER actually spoken to an a&r rep to a label? Lol it seems like I'm the only one who has.

EDIT- new version, tried to fix my overlays http://www.zshare.net/audio/13720070416ee565/
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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby Kosovic » Jun 16th, '08, 21:14

DelinQuent wrote:club tracks are good for demos to show you can do radio hits as well as regular songs. He anyone on this board EVER actually spoken to an a&r rep to a label? Lol it seems like I'm the only one who has.

EDIT- new version, tried to fix my overlays http://www.zshare.net/audio/13720070416ee565/


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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jun 16th, '08, 21:17

:y: overlays are wyy better dq :y: good job
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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 16th, '08, 21:19

in order to mail a demo, you should first speak to an A&R rep to make sure that they are accepting demos and so that they expect yours, then instead of getting thrown to the bottom of the pile, yours actually gets listened to.

EDIT-thanks for the feedback everyone. and good to know i fixed them a bit c-riz
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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby B.A.D. » Jun 16th, '08, 21:50

hmm I've hurd better club tracks from you... this is fun anyways

the mixing is good, the verses r simple but work for the cause, def a party track.. I'll see if I can play it any once in a while at my parties haha.. the hook I wasn't feelin it much, but its alright I guess

nice track

yo random, holla at me for beats n collabs for ya tape bruh
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Re: Random Ghost's 1st Single Ft. Sp & DQ - Put it Down

Postby randomghost » Jun 17th, '08, 07:06

mm...everyone's feed appreictaed :happy: anyways..i dont see any problem for doing a club track....as everyone said am doin it for fun....not for a purpose.....dq the layover sounds better.....good job :y: ....i knew that in the old version DQ's verse has the layovers thang....but it was still sounded good..thats why i didnt ask him to record again....anyways thanks for checkin everyone :flower:

aight x i'll holla at ya soon :happy:
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