Running Through The Daisies

[DelinQuent]

um well, description for this song is... well. hard to explain. wanted to do something different for once. the idea was Michael (my real name) and DQ have mixed into one person so ive gone crazy.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1372034667a12590/

lyrics (may not match 100%)

chorus-my shit split ayo, i lost my brain doooog/
and dq just took ovaaaa, cause michael is a no oneee/
i think that i am crazy, disturbed and brainsick/
runnin thru the daisie's, run along cain't they?/

verse 1-last chance... thats what it feels like/
feel like i might, pull a knife like suicide/
who am i, like who are you, i'm the truth, like thru and thru/
i might lose my noodle too, go like cock-a-doodle-do/
and my mind is thru-the-roof, while you chewin on the roots/
and i'm moving kinda smooth, but i'm losin what the use/
take steps by the one, then and lose em by the two/
i'm the locomotive in the back by the caboose/
i got loco motives tell me are you crazy too?
this is michael and DQ, and our brains just fused/
i'm the gin he's the juice, situation cant defuse/
fuck... are you confused, do you feel moved?/
or do you feel used?, all or nothin i got nothin/
hows that for a clue? sit back as a stu-dent/
i am now a move-ment, attitude just lose-it/
actin like you knew-this, youre actually stu-pid

verse 2-stupid? who me? eww yeah, move left/
cruise right thru life, move like animal/
cracker i'm brittle, white but phenominal/
tighten up your arsenal, loosen up ya conduct or/
i'll contact the conductor, get you kicked out of the choir/
i'm a dick but not a liar, fire? whats on fire?
i'm tricky like macgyver, picky with my style/
no pinky ring to blind ya, presently unsigned but/
pleasently grinding, bourgeoisie i am/
and i guarantee fire, straight from the demon/
so spread your seams an, i spread my semen/
spread my evil, so spread out widest/
and i spread my wiseness, damn am i the lightest/
skinned but the tightest, like his flow is boy scout knots/
and his brain is out the box, damn his frame has got me locked/
am insane to suck his cock, boy scout's preacher says your not/

[B.A.D.]

whoa this is a grammy track rite here haha

Fucking loving this song, first verse is fuckin sick... verse 2.. .damn lyrics is hella nizeee

damn, the flow is again unique from ya, pure fya on this track lol

the hook is excelent, catchy as fuck, lovin the autotune effect on it... sick sick

humm, there was a timing problem on hook 2 and 3... by like 1 sec, but its enough to mess up the whole timing of it...

other than that, excelent track... this has a great single value if you plan to do a tape

10/10

[Kosovic]

You do understand that this effect is not really called autotune.

[<Stiiccy>]

well it was a good song...but the beat didnt fit you at all imo...you do better on slower beats
and no offence but i fucking hate the auto tune shit,,,and you delivery could have been a lil stronger.
the hook i loved..
flow was your typical shit (which is a good thing)
at times i couldnt understand your lyrics

7/10.......(((it would be 8/10 if no auto tune)))))

[Emadyville]

I'm onot big on the autotone either, but I thought it sounded good on the hook which was sick, I liked the first verse a lot more than the second, and a little off like everyone said on the second, thought it was a good concept for a song and fit well with your style, thought rhymes were pretty good for the most part, wasn't a huge fan of the beat, overall I think if you tweeked the lyrics a little in the second and stayed on point this is a hot track. Definitely a good song man keep it up

[DelinQuent]

I thought everyone was gonna hate this cause the concept is so off the wall lol.

Thanks for he feed and after listening to it a billion times I've decided to go back and re record the verses and tweak some of the lyrics to better fit the flow. I used to hate when people used autotune but I just got the vst for it and decided to fuck around a bit lol

Again I'd everyone for taking the time to listen and give me good feedback. I reallllllly appreciate every comment.

[B.A.D.]

fuck what people think

autotune is great... I love the electronic feel it gives to the vocals

[neversnooze]

just wanted to say your flow is great bro, how long did it take u to record the track?

[DelinQuent]

i wrote it all last night, took around two to two and a half hours to write. recorded it today, took about an hour or so to record.

glad to see people are into this track

[randomghost]

the beat has this rock feeling....man crazy flow....delivery is hot ...i love them effects u used in the hook..hot hot.....lyrics is good..loved the song...good job

[DelinQuent]

thanks for checkin random.

i might re record the verses tomorrow to put some more emotion into them.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

delievery was allright...ur flow was instable....u expand words and shit...just like me..and i got bad feedback for it ..so yeah
aint feelin the autotune..
beat was okay

[DelinQuent]

i didn't expand any words, i just pronounced certain words differently and that was to give it an off-the-wall sound. it was to go along with the crazy concept.

i love the autotune.... lol thanks again everyone

[theJFKshow]

I like the chorus, but your verses kinda suck. Your flow is off big time.

[Emadyville]

thanks for checkin random.

i might re record the verses tomorrow to put some more emotion into them.

Yeah yo post it again or something when you re-do it.