Big Ax-D - Memories (feat. Kez) + album info... listen again

[B.A.D.]

wuzup, got some news for ya (if ya interested lol)
I'm workin again on another 2 albums, one is THE MOST ANNOYING 2 (with Kez)..single coming soon.. . and a solo album called THE SECRET 08' which is in the works, I got a bit of it, but still a lot of work left to do. I'll get more info soon

I was having problems uploading tracks, but seems that its fixed now

anyways... Vayonic aka djblue showed me a beat, like 1 hour ago... and damnnn I had to do a track for it

its not gonna be on my album or the kez collab album.. just did it for fun

its called "Memories Of You"... its a story from one year ago but I always wanted to do a track about it, so here it goes: (produced by shadowville)
edit: kez did a nice remix to it, to help me out on some things u guys pointed out... so check again

new version: http://www.zshare.net/audio/13814173d33d6729/

lyrics:

(Verse 1)
Don't you see that I'm pain, don't you see my face
don't you see I will be your friend, my life's a disgrace
I just wanted to be with you and I worked so hard
but at the end it seemed that I was not your man
then I thought we was ok, but started acting strange
lien to my face and gettin me of the range
sometimes I feel that I have nothing to live for
but when I see your face I just feel like I'm reborn
I want another chance to be the one you need
I promise you I will change, I will no longer bleed
I will no longer cry, cuz my eyes are wet enough
I never meant to make u feel that kind of rough
I'm sorry for being mad, I'm sorry for sad
I just want you to be the girl that I never had
beacuse my love is too real, but feel like I'm young
but someday I will grow, and you and me will be strong

(Hook)
and baby you know that deep in my heart
I still love you lady and I want you back
and baby I know that deep in your heart
you feel love for me and you're teared apart

(Verse 2)
Seems I'm not strong enough, I cant just let it go
all the times we had together, the times when we flowed
when you grabed my hand and looked into my eyes
when we went to the movies, when you took me to the sky
when you talked so good with me, when hugged me around
when you sing along with me, when we danced and clowned
when you invited me to your house, when play beer games
when we were so damn drunk, when your love start to rain
when you cried with me, when you told me I rock
when you had some love for me, when our love was strong
when we went to have some fun, when you listened to my tape
when we watched the boondock saints, when we staid till late
when you wear the bamboo chain, when we run in the rain
when you helped me on exams, when you took away my pain
when you warmed my cold hands, when we went on vacation
I miss those things, a perfect love celebration

(Hook)
and baby you know that deep in my heart
I still love you lady and I want you back
and baby I know that deep in your heart
you feel love for me and you're teared apart

(Verse 3)
girl I'm writing this from the buttom of my heart
I just want to be with you, and see I'm not mad
I am happy when you are happy, but you seem so sad
please let me open the door, and finish this war
let me be the man that will be always there for you
I just want you to know that real love is always true
I love how make me lough when I am down
I love the way you look at me and make me sound
like a child after a model, please come again with me
please take my hand, and release the good in me
an angel tries to take me away, but devil keeps me living
you are always on my head, and always on my dreams
I am not a king beacuse I still need my queen
and for you I will do every and each singe thing
think about it girl and tell me what you think again
I feel so stupid now (Ax-D calm down man)

(Hook)
and baby you know that deep in my heart
I still love you lady and I want you back
and baby I know that deep in your heart
you feel love for me and you're teared apart

so ya'll keep peepin for info on THE SECRET 08'.... its comin soon

THE MOST ANNOYING 2 coming soon too...

[<VerbalTouch>]

sucked

but damn good one from you though i think it could of came out a bit better.

I'll need to remix this soon

[Kosovic]

What the hell u doing to your voice?

[B.A.D.]

What the hell u doing to your voice?

whats wrong with my voice??

man... if you gonna post something, please try to be constructive or sometin man, don't do pointless posts in here

[Speech]

the singin in the hook didn work for me, but like siinide said, it showed your real voice (finnaly lmao, i always wonder what ppl sound like when they speak....)
the beat is awesome, wanted to write something to it as soon as i get the money for the studio..guess i leave this to you then lol
lyrics were nice....it's a love-type-song so some basic rhymes couldn be avoided...nobody mad at you thatz the way it goes haha
i liked the song, alone for the fact that it's some real life shit, makes it more interesting to listen to
performance was aait, nothing special..and about the mixin..hmmm i listened to this with my speakers and i could still feel the "sssss" scratching my eardrum, no good....might try it with less dynamics oh and the reverb, turn it down a bit....sounds too hollow
not a bad song tho i liked it

7 / 10

[DelinQuent]

i liked it because it sounded very personal, which makes me listen to it again.

however, the chorus, the singing, coulda been better but it didn't ruin the song.

flow in the verses fell off in certain spots but siinide pointed the spots out.

pronunciation was good.

i liked this track a lot simply because it was a personal track and thats what i like to hear from artists.

[B.A.D.]

WOW lol

@ Siinide: damn, holy fuck..... greatly appreciated man, means a lot... bout the mixing, yeah, it was fast, so couldn't get deep on it, thanks a lot for the feed bruh, I'll take that advice a lot while workin on my album. The emotion... Idk, I felt it really while making this song, but I agree it kinda sounds the same. about the voice... well its a sickness man.. when I speak, normally it sounds raspy (I don't love that) but it goes automaticly like that, somehow when I sing, its wayyy diferent, but I dunno lol.
thanks again man, greatly apreciated

@ Spizz: thanks a million for peepin burh... same thing with the voice, I have this sickness since February I think... fucked up ain't it lol haha... I'll take your mixing adivices too, damn this is really helping me out... trshady is finnaly going back to how its supposed to be, thanks to ya'll... thanks a lot again for your feed, means a lot-

@ DQ: I knew you would like it hahaha, fits 100% yourse style haha, thanks a lot for the feed bruh... I love to sing lol, but yeah, i dunno, maybe it ruined the song hahah (Maybe I should've used auto tune hahaha j/k) I'll try to work out my flow when re-recording it... to bad the lease for this is too expensive so I can't use it for my album haha... thanks man, my album will have a lot of deep personal stuff there...

Thanks a lot for the feed... means to me more of what you imagine..

[B.A.D.]

btw: I got a lot of interesting info for this album... like production bio and stuff, will be a nice read

I'll post it later this month

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

pretty good....as everbody said some deep shit...makes it interessting
couldnt really understand 100% of it..just like 98% lol
dont know..and listen to spizzy if it comes to mixin

[randomghost]

am feelin the track man....nice lyrics...nice flow....hot delivery.....great song man..nice work

[SajN]

Loved it man!

Even though the lyrics are kinda simple, it doesn't ruin it because like Siinide said: "The real lyrics were there, no need for crazy rhymeschemes in a track like this."

The hook is good, could be better, but I did feel it.

I like personal/emotional songs so this track was very good

Nice man!

[Kosovic]

What the hell u doing to your voice?

whats wrong with my voice??

man... if you gonna post something, please try to be constructive or sometin man, don't do pointless posts in here

Oh come on, u know i like ur music, i dont feel like criticizing it right now. When you upload your entire album, then we see.

[Robbie G]

I liked it man.

Your accent is the best.

[B.A.D.]

damns, thanks to all for the postive comments,I'll work better on my flaws

but hell yeah, thanks a lot to shady babie, chris, cocco, infection & random

thanks to all

[B.A.D.]

UPDATED VERSION

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