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[NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby Blind » Jun 18th, '08, 20:28

Check out my new lyrical love track
Enjoy
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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 18th, '08, 20:39

daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn
great shit man...
everytime i hear you,
you get better and better...
the hook was amazing,,,
i couldnt understand you at times but still
9/10 man
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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby B.A.D. » Jun 18th, '08, 20:41

URD baby!!!

yo, did u made the beat??

the beat is a bit too loud lol... but yeah its a lyrical love track all the way

the mixin is a bit strange, not bad, very good actually.. but strange lol

there are some parts I don't understand cuz of the volume of the beat is too loud

the hook is catchy, don't know why but it reminds me of cypress hill hahaha

anywae good track :y:
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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby Blind » Jun 18th, '08, 20:44

sticcy z wrote:daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamngreat shit man...everytime i hear you,you get better and better...the hook was amazing,,,i couldnt understand you at times but still9/10 man

Thanx man :worship: Gotta work on my pronouncation. true but still thanx :worship:

URD baby!!!

yo, did u made the beat??

the beat is a bit too loud lol... but yeah its a lyrical love track all the way

the mixin is a bit strange, not bad, very good actually.. but strange lol

there are some parts I don't understand cuz of the volume of the beat is too loud

the hook is catchy, don't know why but it reminds me of cypress hill hahaha

anywae good track


Yeah that's my beat. Mixing is a hard shit so I did what I could but anyway thanx bro :worship: :worship:
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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby Speech » Jun 19th, '08, 07:03

nice track you gotz there...hmm turn down the vol of the beat, not the voccals up, cuz if you do, they fuck up.....
lyrics were ace...some real shit (if thatz the way you think of your single situation lol).....
pronnounciation is what bothered me alot, swollowed words here and there...might be your accent idk but anyway..not hating on your accent, we european brothers right? brap

flow was great, i loved the flow, you got some sorta sense for it to sound very nice and emotions was there

cool stuff

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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby Blind » Jun 19th, '08, 07:23

Speech wrote:nice track you gotz there...hmm turn down the vol of the beat, not the voccals up, cuz if you do, they fuck up.....lyrics were ace...some real shit (if thatz the way you think of your single situation lol).....pronnounciation is what bothered me alot, swollowed words here and there...might be your accent idk but anyway..not hating on your accent, we european brothers right? brapflow was great, i loved the flow, you got some sorta sense for it to sound very nice and emotions was therecool stuff8.9 / 10

Danm thanx for the feed bro :worship: :worship: Yeah pronouncation is my only defect I'll work on it :y: lol once again thanx :worship:
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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby SajN » Jun 19th, '08, 09:19

Yeah man!
That's was sick!
The chorus was catchy :y:
Loved the verses, maybe because of your emotions/delievery :p
Nah for real, they were good!

Keep It Up :y:
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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jun 19th, '08, 10:38

really nice track...beat is fine ..just like everyone said...turn the beat volume down
umm not really feelin the hook like others
and wut spizzy said about the flow...great work on it :y:
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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby Blind » Jun 19th, '08, 10:50

Thanx erybody I'm very happy that you like it :worship: :worship: Emotions is what I really felt that time
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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 19th, '08, 17:48

i love the beat. good choice.

flow sounds kinda odd cause sometimes to sped up to fit some words in. other than that flow was good.

chorus reminded me of bone thugs n harmony lol. i kinda liked it, kinda didnt.

rhymes are pretty good. delivery was solid.

i felt like the emotion didn't match the subject of the song, the idea of the song sounded sad and you came across as cold.

regaurdless i still liked this track and i give it at 8/10. good shit, keep working :y:
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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby Blind » Jun 19th, '08, 19:06

DelinQuent wrote:i love the beat. good choice.flow sounds kinda odd cause sometimes to sped up to fit some words in. other than that flow was good.chorus reminded me of bone thugs n harmony lol. i kinda liked it, kinda didnt.rhymes are pretty good. delivery was solid.i felt like the emotion didn't match the subject of the song, the idea of the song sounded sad and you came across as cold.regaurdless i still liked this track and i give it at 8/10. good shit, keep working

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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby Tornado » Jun 20th, '08, 17:10

chorus..OMG u got B-Real of Cypress Hill to do it...ill beat ad nice flow n rhymes, accent makes it hard to understand in places but still nice...like the dark vibe i get
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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby Blind » Jun 22nd, '08, 13:27

Tornado wrote:chorus..OMG u got B-Real of Cypress Hill to do it...ill beat ad nice flow n rhymes, accent makes it hard to understand in places but still nice...like the dark vibe i get


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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby shady45 » Jun 23rd, '08, 16:56

Can you write me the lyrics from your song? :)
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Re: [NEW] The Ballad Of Unhappened Love [New]

Postby Blind » Jun 23rd, '08, 17:22

shady45 wrote:Can you write me the lyrics from your song?

no problem bro, there it go

It all was started with smile, still remember time
Pick you from my memory like from archive pick another file
Now it's all hundred miles far away from me
Wondering if I changed some shit what our fate would be
I could see your eyes more frequently
Now picture me holding your hand I guess it all sounds fictitiously
And officialy we hardly hug each other
Pain still remains and it's a shame... call me your lover
Guess u wanna call me your brother, nah, it ain't my style
I still smile, recalling times when we went wild,
When we talked whole night, I thought we moved alright
But when I looked into your soul I found a stone that I couldn't fight
Now I just imagining if the tragedy would have its happy end
No sympothy, you sleep with me and kick with me and don't pretend
What if our lines could be attached bound with the cuff
But now it's just flying wind, unhappend love

[chorus]
Lost paradise, otherwise it's a hell
Look through my eyes again and guess what I felt
Running for nothing, and I'm outta puff
Ha, This is the Ballad of Unhappened love

I used to find me a slut to get a nut and bust
But ur the one who made me feel you love you and trust
My heart bleed everytime I meet my baby in the street
Got me needed in more weed to get me a good deep sleep
Maybe I'll see you in my dream with changed script
It may drift us to some island where the rules are all ripped
Just you and me making a bonfire, singing this song
And we wont step out each other, utill dream is gone
And reality come, same shit again
I dial you on my phone, but all I hear is beeps and the rain
Behind the window, why you decided this way
Bet if I wasn't broke, you'd say the words that you was scared to say
But it's all O'K, I'm glad that we friends
Make yourself love someone doesnt make sense
But things change with time, you may change your mind
But when you realize, you'll find that I ain't around no more
[Chorus]
We could lead our life to heaven, seven killometer high
We could fly on the clouds like walking along the avenue... my
Angel we could make love 'till dawn
Make our own ill porn, I know I turn you on
You could call me don, I could call you my queen
And I wouldn't every night see the same shitty dream
Where i run and she's gone, there is rainy weather
And it always ends that I’m in the deadlock and can’t get her
And despite all barriers, all fears and all tears
I still love to see you in my motherfucking dreams
I still laughing with you, I still wanna reach you
Still wanna have a girl behind my back, and I miss you
I wanna kiss you and hug you, feel the bliss then I'll fuck you
Haha, maybe I lil' rough, but it won't stop me to love you
And when you stay alone with the silence, you will hear my voice
Think better, when you gon' make another choice
[chorus]


P.S. Somewhere I changed the word during recording
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