*IM ME AUDIO**

[Boston]

well, i dropped my verse in the creative writing and heres the cheap audio for it haha
its harder than yall think to get studio time, well a decent studio, but yeah anyways here it is
all types of feed back would help
thank you.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1407866567711db9/
http://www.badongo.com/file/10026741
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=NE8K3R08


expectations high now, man i got a lot to prove/
came in as a poor man, i dont got a lot to lose/
but i got a lot to say, so im not about to move/
just took the saftey off, racing off, about to shoot/
i got my fire back, yes that burn to fire back/
no shoe prints or tire tracks, blue prints or wires tapped/
like an alcoholic we can take it from bar to bar/
talking wreckless, leave you dead in the back of Farmer's car/
im not an angry person, i just get provoked quick/
runnin' your mouth will guarantee to get your throat slit/
your life is hope-less, i hope you know this/
i got the full clip to show you this aint bull shit/
so sick n' tired of bitches crying n' talking shit/
so sick n tired of snitches whining n walking big/
ho bitch is hiding, where the fuck is jon robinson/
n when i see you i guarantee you you wont walk again/

[Kez]

Won't play for me.

[Boston]

added some more links

[Kez]

Quality is absolutely terrible, you have to improve that or else people just won't want to listen to it. It's insufferable.

Some good lyrics and rhymes here actually though
Delivery is good at times at other times you sound a bit bored
Beat would of been nice
Concept is simple, but done decently enough
Hard to judge on flow without a beat, but flow sounds pretty good too.

[DelinQuent]

as kez said flow is hard to judge but it seemed good from what i could hear.

delivery and rhyming were good. concept is simple, but as kez said, done well.

you need better quality lol

keep working, good shit

[<VerbalTouch>]

ask someone here to mix for you its good if the quality was fixed

[Boston]

lol well thanks for the feedback all
yes it is horrible quality, recorded from a phone haha

i just need to work on my emotion/delivery more
thanks for the advice