Something Like Homicide A.K.A. Tha Return Of Rain Matrix

[Rain Matrix]

Track- Something Like homicide
Artist - Rain Matrix
Album- I'm Recording For It
File Type- MP3
Link-something like homicide.mp3 - 2.99MB

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[Kez]

Well, it's an improvement definately.

Lyrics are great
Flow's getting better
Concept is good
Delivery still needs work though
And you should of overlayed the hook and been a bit more fierce given the topic.

But a definite improvement over your past stuff.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

beat is sick...
but sorry...lol@they singin...doesnt work...
flow improves but goes off at times
lyrics as always
yeah the hook has some good start of delievery improvment...but u should put that in the verses
nice end tho kool idea

[Speech]

i caught up like 8 words or something...your quality is worse than worse...i suggest you don't start recording untill you got yourself a better mic...mean while, improve your delivery and learn (or get told) how to mix....beat was the only thing enjoyable for real lol
what i actually hated on this track is the voids you had in there...like before the chorus starts and even IN the chorus...not good

not being rude for nothing i want you to improve so don't hate me for this feedback


peace

[Rain Matrix]

fa real I had no problem listening to it I know it's not superb quality

but my lyrics have meaning

thanks for tha feed this is a test to see who'll remember...

...rain magically disappears

[DelinQuent]

as spizzy said, quality was bad.

rhymes were pretty good. flow was good, but off in some parts. you started to stuff extra syllables into some of the line which threw the flow off.

delivery was extremely weak in the first verse, you sound like you don't even like rapping lol.
it got better in the second verse at the start but then it became weaker as you went on.

keep working

[Speech]

fa real I had no problem listening to it I know it's not superb quality

but my lyrics have meaning

thanks for tha feed this is a test to see who'll remember...

...rain magically disappears

who'll remember what?

[Nu Syd]

checkin, real feedback, dont hate coz im being real with you.

beat is ok, your volume needs work,way to low on vocals, didn't feel the intro, work on your presence and flow, chorus is horrible man, need some serious work bro, lyrics aint bad, without the presence and flow its hard to pay attention to what your getting at.

Everyones lyrics have meaning, dont neglect everything else and only think textcee style lyrics then finding a beat will save the song,write to the beat, also work on your vocal tone, seemed way off in your range, and yeh,work on that quality.

keep at it

[Rain Matrix]

I was a bit snappy I like it it's supposed to be revolution music
my electric style will ark bad what do u noah bout that...lol

[M-Pyre]

yo, the beat is ill, 'm assuming you didn't make it?
your lyrics is top shell, flow was on beat....

this was bad fucking quality, sorry to say but seriously you need to get a better mic and a good sound card, then mix your vocals with cool edit pro, put sum reverb on it, ad noise reduction, compress your vocals, and then amplify it with normalize or hardlimiting, then mix it into your beat!

once you have done this the delivery it's self will become better on it's own, of course you will have to put on sum effort to but believe me when I say this, it will help!!

all this will cost you no less then a hundred bucks, and it will be worth your money!

I'm saying all this because I would like to work with you if your game.

ow, one more thing don't sing atleast not with this quality

hollarate