Bragging Rights

[Rain Matrix]

Track- Bragging Rights
Artist- Rain Matrix
Album- Independant Release
File Type- MP3
Link- bragging rights.mp3 - 3.19MB

[Kosovic]

Wtf is that?

[DelinQuent]

^great feedback.

beat is pretty sick.

delivery doesn't match, your lyrics are angry but your delivery sounds like you're just talking.

flow is off as well, it's sounding choppy. rhymes are solid.

overall your delivery completely ruins this song, you have no swag to you, you sound completely disinterested in rapping. so it's like, if you didn't even wanna rap this, who's gonna even wanna listen? you gotta get more into it. keep working

[Kez]

I don't think there's any point of any of us feeding you.

Cause when we do, you'll just go

"it sounds fine to me

rain dissapears..."

Seriously if you don't wanna accept some fucking feed stop posting your tracks.

[Rain Matrix]

I don't think there's any point of any of us feeding you.

Cause when we do, you'll just go

"it sounds fine to me

rain dissapears..."

Seriously if you don't wanna accept some fucking feed stop posting your tracks.

lil ol rain matrix has been here at trshady for a while I can win text battles I write like a champ
oh and how about we do a collab or something so people can hear us both on a track like that

seriously man I don't care if u guys cherish this or diss on it cuz of my swag
my originality makes up for it I am white I'm not a poser

[Tash8]

^ ur a joke dude, if ur happy with how u sound right now and dont' want to improve then great... have fun having only one listener.

[Rain Matrix]

I'm not gonna change who I am for nobody can't do it
my lyrics arn't tha average
my flows there whatever swag u missed was prolly in those metaphors

I'm more than open for tips on how to improve

[Tash8]

I'm not gonna change who I am for nobody can't do it
my lyrics arn't tha average
my flows there whatever swag u missed was prolly in those metaphors

I'm more than open for tips on how to improve

don't get too crazy about ur lyrics, cuz i dont think ur the most lyrical person alive, for that matter even this site...

ur flow isn't really BAD, but it's fucked up... try to flow to drums...

[DelinQuent]

i actually thought the lyrics weren;t very good

no offense, but like everyone said, if you don't wanna accept tips on how to be better, then i don't wanna hear your shit.

giving more emotion into your delivery isn't changing who you are, it's being a REAL rapper.

[Rain Matrix]

no one made u peep this thread
I simply said I could careless if u don't think I'm a real rapper or not
or even if this track is good... it's not it means a thing u don't know me
so go about yur "real rapping" business and I'll do me

so keep doing u I'm not tha hater here

[Tash8]

u could careless, so that maens that u do care right now right?

[Rain Matrix]

I really don't like I said if u like it u like it if u wanna say it needs improvement thanks
u wanna tell me I'm not a real rapper cuz I spend time on my lyrics and I don't sound like everybody else well then thats just a backwords ass way to think

I'm glad to be alive I love rap and I'll continue rapping far on into tha future I wish u all luck cuz posting yur useless high school comments on my life is retarded... straight up

P.S. I know quite a few that like my music

[Tash8]

I really don't like I said if u like it u like it if u wanna say it needs improvement thanks
u wanna tell me I'm not a real rapper cuz I spend time on my lyrics and I don't sound like everybody else well then thats just a backwords ass way to think

I'm glad to be alive I love rap and I'll continue rapping far on into tha future I wish u all luck cuz posting yur useless high school comments on my life is retarded... straight up

P.S. I know quite a few that like my music

sorry but ur not rapping, rapping consists of FLOW and LYRICS, u got lyrics but u dont have flow...

[Rain Matrix]

oh well if that's true it's my problem and not yurs is it not homeboy...
go make a fucking beat or something

[<VerbalTouch>]

whys audios that are bad turn into flame threads?

Lyrics dont mean shit if you cant rap them.