First audio..

[Robbie G]

I know the quality sucks, and it probably does too but if anyone could give some advice that'd be great.

oh and it's a beat from mart85's soundclick, i really like it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcdICGfoIEk

http://www.zshare.net/audio/14580759ca9cb080/

let me explain, let me show you my pain
look at my bloody hands I'll never wash away the stain
look at my life and tell me what you think
not much to go by watch it pass as I slowly shrink
it's like what you get when you mix and match
things and people, you should never get too attached
let me tell you now it will never stay
from day to day slowly it all goes away
look at me like I want to scream it
should I get a degree? Or just leave it
the choices I must make and the answers to find
do it now or break, wheres the button to rewrind?
you never get a first chance and a second impression
so go fast and don't wait oh how the pressure is pressin
'till the end I say it to my friend
let me explain how it's on you I depend...

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

wooooahhhh...please convert it into mp3 haha

[Kosovic]

Awwwwww....quality sucks?

Then dont post it.

[Robbie G]

Awwwwww....quality sucks?

Then dont post it.

it's the best i could do.....

[Robbie G]

wooooahhhh...please convert it into mp3 haha

http://www.zshare.net/audio/14580759ca9cb080/

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

uhm sry but somehow i still cant listen to it,,,wuts the amr thing

[Robbie G]

uhm sry but somehow i still cant listen to it,,,wuts the amr thing

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcdICGfoIEk

Thanks for checking it out man, I know it's not much but any feed or tips would be great.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

ur flow was so-so...sometimes it goes off but hey 1st audio..
i like the end..the last two lines
well quality is wack..but oh well...didnt accept much from quality
delievery should be improved....i mean...1st u fixed the quality problem maybe u voice/emotions sound clearer....but altho...rap like u really mean the lyrics..with a LOT LOT passion
lyrics are fine..no complaints....
work on flow,delievery and try to fix ur quality if possible

[Robbie G]

ur flow was so-so...sometimes it goes off but hey 1st audio..
i like the end..the last two lines
well quality is wack..but oh well...didnt accept much from quality
delievery should be improved....i mean...1st u fixed the quality problem maybe u voice/emotions sound clearer....but altho...rap like u really mean the lyrics..with a LOT LOT passion
lyrics are fine..no complaints....
work on flow,delievery and try to fix ur quality if possible

yeah..thanks.

I should be able to get a mic and then work on flow and stuff. It's a bitch trying to rap into a cellphone.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

oh damn u recorded wit a cellphone..lmfao...creative

[Robbie G]

:o YAY YOUR RAPPING NOW!

ur flow was so-so...sometimes it goes off but hey 1st audio..
i like the end..the last two lines
well quality is wack..but oh well...didnt accept much from quality
delievery should be improved....i mean...1st u fixed the quality problem maybe u voice/emotions sound clearer....but altho...rap like u really mean the lyrics..with a LOT LOT passion
lyrics are fine..no complaints....
work on flow,delievery and try to fix ur quality if possible

Pretty much what he said.

And to help your quality, you need to get Cool Edit Pro

Thanks man ..and cool edit pro?

All i do is put the accapella and beat into audacity and badaboom it's done.

[Kosovic]

Awwwwww....quality sucks?

Then dont post it.

it's the best i could do.....

The best you could do....doesnt mean the best in general. Your best could be below someone's worst.

[<VerbalTouch>]

Really good for your first audio you need to ask someone here to mix for you though if you cant do it good yourself

[SawtootH]

ye man its good. i think u need 2 get a job tho 2 pay for sum recording shit. haha on a cell phone lmao.

[Robbie G]

i got plenty of cash just never bought one.