Bar - Get On The Game

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Bar - Get On The Game
http://www.zshare.net/audio/1459053910526748/

Mixed by tash (thanx again ), produced by...idk, random instumental, call this the first reject from bloodline since it wasnt getting used on the tape (due to quality issues that ill sort out for future tracks) i didnt wanne waste it. its a "freestyle" mixtape like track so it aint top quality, and it isnt a freestyle either im saying its just that style lol


feedback is apreciated if you leave feedback and have a recently new topic i havent checked drop the link in your post here and ill make sure to leave you feed


also a sidenote, there couple of lines people might take offence to, if you do i dont care, its punches at autotune take them as you will




Lyrics:

put on your sun glasses im on a level none passes
trying to hold me down but your pins are all tackless
i practice this practical process im packed with
im metaphorical n went i met a foeriegn tool
im thought provoking somehting they aint calling cool
so i start of choking then i drown them in the pool
a, gather information its not a sin for hating
id rather this formation would blather make your brain spin
a mic is the painting i call it framed art
started as a lame spark and now its a flame ark
noah couldnt put me out a know i shouldnt push about
but ya'll should take the coushion out
and let your voice be free even big ax-d couldnt auto tune me
a fought aroon three of these pussy's i see
then i make them flee then i make there flow lower
bringing out there vocoder then they go go flop
sounding like i wanne be coughing robocop
i aint dissing no one i just dislike the gimmick
wonder how we think to spit it coz i really couldnt grit it
but who am i to judge to y'all its one love
let me talk about the war this is a mission breif
ya'll must be pissin greif i can see anticipation
then i grab to grip your hating as i slash n rip you blatant
send you off to satan stop waiting on the chance
coz the chance is waiting this aint no small scale search
this is hypersonic speed dating, So Slow down or speed up
but get on the game no matter what

[Kosovic]

Hmmm, you found a pop eliminator?

On second thought....u didnt, i still listen to them.

[Tash8]

Hmmm, you found a pop eliminator?

On second thought....u didnt, i still listen to them.

nah, i removed half of them but got tired and couldn't bother removing the other half cuz he said it was just reject mixtape verse.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

a bit hard to understand wit ur scottish accent but i wont bitch about it...makes u unique
ryhmes are tight....delievery: ALL GOOD flow was nice man
gonna hit u up on msn about the flow tho
worth listen...nice lil track bar

[Kosovic]

Hmmm, you found a pop eliminator?

On second thought....u didnt, i still listen to them.

nah, i removed half of them but got tired and couldn't bother removing the other half cuz he said it was just reject mixtape verse.

How did u remove them?

[Tash8]

Hmmm, you found a pop eliminator?

On second thought....u didnt, i still listen to them.

nah, i removed half of them but got tired and couldn't bother removing the other half cuz he said it was just reject mixtape verse.

How did u remove them?

it's simple but i ain't explaining it here cause i dont wanna fuck up his topic, if u want PM me.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

kick ass beat..nice and old school.
quality was great, so was your flow
Couldn't really understand the lyrics very well

good track, besides that last point

@audio heads: I'm done in the audio section for a couple months cause of a medical problem. lol

thanks man apreciate the feedback and sorry forgot to put the lyrics in the post added them now though thanx again for checking


@chris, thanx man appreciate it

[Kosovic]

Yeah when i choose a beat, i choose a beat.

[Tash8]

Yeah when i choose a beat, i choose a beat.

just for another thing, i hated this beat

@Chet, i told him on msn, he pulled an eminem, on pistol poppin where he disses the south then says i ain't even dissing the osuth

[Big B]

Good lyrics and good flow Bar .
Fresh track keep it up.

[Xray]

really dig the beat man....delivery is good but can be improving....i recon you can spit those lyrics much better lyrics straight dope man, fire for real. *ignores the ax-d line* mixing is not bad. but hardcore mixing isn't required for these type tracks. good job to both of you

[Kez]

They're not really disses, merely references.

Ax does use autotune, and Rain Matrix does sound like Robocop.

He's probably just pissing around.

And i thought the lyrics were sick, flow was great. At times you kinda ate some of your words a bit, but meh was still all understandable. Concept is great, beat's decent but the background noise is annoying.

Nice little track though Whenever you drop somethin it's always above par.


(or should i say above Bar

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

really dig the beat man....delivery is good but can be improving....i recon you can spit those lyrics much better lyrics straight dope man, fire for real. *ignores the ax-d line* mixing is not bad. but hardcore mixing isn't required for these type tracks. good job to both of you

thnx man, apreciate the feedback and yeh i probly cold have given a bit more, im not makng esxcuses but i got to watch my recordings coz i ain got a pop filter right now and if i go to much and emphasise my quality gets messed up alot, once i get money and get a filter i can go all out thx again

They're not really disses, merely references.

Ax does use autotune, and Rain Matrix does sound like Robocop.

He's probably just pissing around.

And i thought the lyrics were sick, flow was great. At times you kinda ate some of your words a bit, but meh was still all understandable. Concept is great, beat's decent but the background noise is annoying.

Nice little track though Whenever you drop somethin it's always above par.


(or should i say above Bar

thanx man and yeh they aint, i just know how this forum can be at sometimes (enimee ect. dissing for fun) and i aint like that lol im merely fooling around and yeh remember im on top "bar none" lmao remember me trying to do that tape when i started out lmao anywae thanx again for the feed


@wullie, thanx man need to post yo raps soon

[Big B]

@wullie, thanx man need to post yo raps soon

no can do some up tight fools will start hatin' on me

[DelinQuent]

damn, good shit here.

quality didnt seem to be an issue to me. the punch on autotune was sick, robocop lmfao.

good flow, good lyrics. 9/10 for skill 7/10 for personal enjoyment.