Bar - New War Coming (deadly knightsahde)

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

keepin this short coz got to use on screen keyboard.


similiar to get on the game its more practice

mixed by tash, produced by leatherface

http://www.zshare.net/audio/14890098ab3796bc/

lyrics

there's a new war brewing and a few swords screwin
into the enemies chest and then i bless the crest
of the war on there heads as they rest in a slumber
thatll be woken by thunder coz they know there a blunder
used to have my flow guessing but now im progressing
im hot dont go toe testing coz there no resting
for the wiked or the wack as i take the cricket to my bat
and make your wickets all flat i got a new mind frame
were a few find pain every shot i take, i took as if i scored
always bein driven forward by the focus of my ford
im a locust in a haord i wrote this and we poured
upon the page im up on a rage
call this deadly knightshade you steadly find made
a place were we rhyme paid you stair then climb stage
thats the height i aim so i try play right in game never in vain
k.i called a regroup the game needs re-took
we got depth in the mobb but never we shook
even though i fool around no one ever took us down
we just had to hook the sound while you all released wack
look watch we eased back, i perfected the craft
k.i erected the draft now a new wars coming
thinking we'll flop ? dont be daft

[Xray]

cool downloading, leave feedback later

[<Stiiccy>]

k, that was sickest shit ive heard from you
now i want to listen to some uk rap
great job bar...keep it up

[Kez]

Holy shit that was great

"Driven by the focus of my ford"

[B.A.D.]

whoa beat is excelent!, good choice

the mixin on this particular track, I didn't liked it... dunno why, maybe volumes or sometin... still good, but not my choice

lyrics are great, tho there's something strange on your structure and rhyme-scheme.. but seem like it worked pretti nice... but def some of the best lyrics from you

glad to see u TMW are back... good luck

btw: I could understand almost 90% of what u said now... haha, I love it for that hahaha

excelent track, shame its too short, but good work

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

k, that was sickest shit ive heard from you
now i want to listen to some uk rap
great job bar...keep it up

thanx man appreciate the feedback n glad it open uk rap to you more

Holy shit that was great

"Driven by the focus of my ford"

lol thanx man appreciate it i thought of that line along time ago when cypherin in college n just remembered when writing this track that i had never actually used it

whoa beat is excelent!, good choice

the mixin on this particular track, I didn't liked it... dunno why, maybe volumes or sometin... still good, but not my choice

lyrics are great, tho there's something strange on your structure and rhyme-scheme.. but seem like it worked pretti nice... but def some of the best lyrics from you

glad to see u TMW are back... good luck

btw: I could understand almost 90% of what u said now... haha, I love it for that hahaha

excelent track, shame its too short, but good work

beats by leatherface of rhyme asylumn they got a album out and shit ill post there myspace link in my post later incase yall wanne check them out they are seriously dope.

and thanx man, about my rhyme structure i dont use one, i found it was the main problem with my flow coz i was trying to stick to a structure now i rhyme were ever i feel neccesary, usually i got simple rhymes on the snares and in bewtween that is my playground for multi's, it seems to be working coz i feel my flows getting better, thats the reason im releasing these short tracks to experiment with my flow and delivery more.

thanx again for the feed, and ill as usual keep working on my prnouncation and shit

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

lol bar u should redo the whole braveheart movie with your music...not just cause were your from, but ur lyrics are mostly old school....like bronze age shit I love it

Lyrics are just mind blowing....damn u can write like a muthafucker...how long does a verse like this take you? I couldn't write 4 lines this good if I spend 4 hours doing it

the end of it was shit...I wanted a big bang...all I got was daft air

I've come to terms with ur accent, and that without lyrics, I'm not gonna understand half the shit lol. But shit is wicked nice when I'm reading along with it

great shit

lmao imma remix the whole braveheart soundtrack now

and this one took me about 2, ten minute sittings, i hardly every write all in the one go, so i write for ten minutes then about 3 hours later ill go back and work on it again. im always wiritng and thinking of random lines so sometimes i can go through my book and get 3 or 5 lines i wrote 6 days ago then put it into the verse lol

thanx for the feed man apprciate it

Is a dope track and i enjoyed it with no problems but i can tell due to me coming from u.k also that for me its easier to understand your accent in rap. Although i dont think you should lose the acccent becuse its one of those things that makes you Bar i think if its posible you should make it a tad clearer

awsomness

thanx man, imma keep working on making it clearer, apreciate the feedback

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

dat was a dope flow with dope lyrics
one thing i noticed was the "so i try play right in game "...was a bit rushed...
other than that
and wasnt the fan of the mixing..sorry tash lol
overlays had way too much hollow...just wasnt a fan of it

[mart85]

Another pretty good short verse my only "complaints" were already mentionned by killa and c-riz (making it a bit clearer, and the rushed line) but overall it was great... I liked that mobb deep reference it was nice

good job, keep it up

[Tash8]

and wasnt the fan of the mixing..sorry tash lol
overlays had way too much hollow...just wasnt a fan of it

i dont mind critiscm, but at least explain why it wasn't good... the hollow shit i can't deal with because that's up to bar to record in a better room... i recieve his acapella with a lot of reverb already.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

well it was a bit too much reverb or wutever u added....idk i think i mixed Bar's verse on Raise Ya Lighter a slighty better and no i dont remember how i mixed his verse lol....
sry that i cant be more constructive

[Tash8]

well it was a bit too much reverb or wutever u added....idk i think i mixed Bar's verse on Raise Ya Lighter a slighty better and no i dont remember how i mixed his verse lol....
sry that i cant be more constructive

like i said, i talked to bar about this, I added No reverb what so ever on the main pellas and overlays.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

oh well...i mean it was still good..in a way..just not perfect lets stop and not ruin this thread
psh now...feed this guyz

[Tornado]

Gotta say pob one of your better tracks as its more clear and your not eating up words...what withthe 1 verses..i want whole songs...ne way your accent aint a problem on this one and makes it unique ..keep going

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Another pretty good short verse my only "complaints" were already mentionned by killa and c-riz (making it a bit clearer, and the rushed line) but overall it was great... I liked that mobb deep reference it was nice

good job, keep it up

thanx man, i thought no one was goin to mention the mobb deep line witch i thought was pretty smart so you made my day for bringing it up lol appreciate the feedback



@the mixing discussion, i got a pretty small square room, i record with the window and door closed,so its naturual reverb without being in a booth i dunno how to stop that but saying that there is no "perfect" mixed, some people love reverb some people hate it, other love lots of layovers other hate them, its all opinion so trying to please everyone with a mix is a near impossible thing to do.

Gotta say pob one of your better tracks as its more clear and your not eating up words...what withthe 1 verses..i want whole songs...ne way your accent aint a problem on this one and makes it unique ..keep going

thanks man, and these are just practice tracks most of these verses were written quickly and im just experimenting with flow and emotion and also clearer delivery, i aint even got them on myspace lol well i think i put get on the game on there lol anywae yeh they just practice for me, im working on full tracks and stuff with strong concepts they just aint done yet coz i take more time with them, apreciate the feedback